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Penwing
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0 posted 2009-07-30 02:49 PM


My eyes fill with tears.


As the inferno Destroys


All we know and love

,Penwing

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Margherita
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1 posted 2009-07-30 07:19 PM


This is well done, dear Alex, could refer to many a situation.

Love,
Margherita

D.Lester Young
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2 posted 2009-07-30 07:47 PM


Very nice haiku.
Oklahoma Rose
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3 posted 2009-07-31 09:28 PM


A very sad Haiku.
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4 posted 2009-08-03 02:42 AM


Good job.  

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5 posted 2009-08-03 08:37 AM


Good Ku....sadly touching....Peaceseaker
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