navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #45 » White Page Of White Ink
Open Poetry #45
Post A Reply Post New Topic White Page Of White Ink Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
D.Lester Young
Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219
Austin, Tx

0 posted 2009-07-29 09:54 PM


White Page Of White Ink

Tick tock tear drop
Drip drip drip drip …
Faded memories grave marks
Births
Drip drip drip drip …
Tick Tock rest in peace.

Blank page of existence
Invisible ink life sentence.

Tick tock tear drop -
Drip drip drip …
Tear torn apart shreds -
Tattered humpty dumpty shell
Shattered skeletal frame.
Dust to dust flames
Cremation grey remains
Scatters shadow domains -
Tick tock tear drop
Drip drip drip …

Bleeding veins impregnate
Cellulous fibers indelible heart
Contrasting pulse inkblots -
Splat, splat, splat -
Inscription
White Page Of Red Ink
Afterlife blossoms.

David Lester Young 07/29/09 © all rights owned by author
De-Terminated poet, somewhere in America not on company time


© Copyright 2009 David Lester Young - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2009-07-30 06:15 AM


Impressive rhythm that really shows how fast we travel on this planet Earth into ... the "blossoming of afterlife".

Insightful and beautiful write, dear David!

Love,
Margherita

D.Lester Young
Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219
Austin, Tx
2 posted 2009-07-30 06:44 AM


Margherita Thank You for your comment, blessings Angel.

This is a little abstract but have hidden meanings. Yes the"blossoming of afterlife" of having accomplished something.

Oklahoma Rose
Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586
Oklahoma USA
3 posted 2009-07-31 09:53 PM


A very beautiful and insightful poem.
D.Lester Young
Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219
Austin, Tx
4 posted 2009-07-31 09:59 PM


Oklahoma Rose Thank You again for your time, Blessings.
Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #45 » White Page Of White Ink

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary