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Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2009-07-29 03:25 PM

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Who are you
Beauty

Suddenly
You appear
Out of nowhere
To dance
By the shore
Of a pale blue sea

Is that a smile
I spy through the white
Mists of your dress
Flowing all around you
Where would you have me go
In the soft dawn light
To what land of dreams

Bidding me
To follow you
Like a trusting child
Or perhaps again
Like a man in love

I’m no fool to fall for
Someone so mystical
Cornflowers in her hair

Well maybe
Just a little
After all

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jbstillwater
Member

since 2009-07-03

Posts 216
Albuquerque, New Mexico

1 posted 2009-07-29 03:48 PM

Bravissimo!! Sexy and sensual. Great poem!

Jan

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2009-07-29 05:16 PM

Softly sensual, beautiful tune.

M

brneyedgrly
Senior Member

since 2009-06-08

Posts 1125
nowhere and everywhere

3 posted 2009-07-29 09:08 PM

john

~~a southern wind water angel with
blue flowers in her hair~~

and you can write 'beautiful' too

my mind won't rest and I don't sleep...
not even in my dreams ~ s. nicks

D.Lester Young
Senior Member

since 2001-12-08

Posts 1219
Austin, Tx

4 posted 2009-07-29 09:51 PM

Sailing among the prevailing breezes of your words is a blessed experience.

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

5 posted 2009-07-30 03:17 PM

One of your best, John.
Ida

Oklahoma Rose
Senior Member

since 2008-02-28

Posts 1586
Oklahoma USA

6 posted 2009-07-31 09:42 PM

A very beautiful sensual poem.

brneyedgrly
Senior Member

since 2009-06-08

Posts 1125
nowhere and everywhere

7 posted 2009-08-01 11:04 AM

just reading again

this is my favorite of yours

shel

my mind won't rest and I don't sleep...
not even in my dreams ~ s. nicks

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

8 posted 2009-08-01 04:20 PM

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Thanks all

If anyone’s interested, this was brought on by a tune
of the title on the Chieftains 3  release, (which I first
heard 30 years ago).  It along with: Three Variations
On a Theme of Plum Blossoms,  (composed by Huan Yi),
are my favorites.

Thanks again,

John

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