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Penwing
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since 2009-07-27
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Waverly, MN

0 posted 2009-07-28 03:51 PM


It is dark.
It is quiet.
It is cool.
I am alone.
Perfect............
I throw open my heart!
And i throw open my soul!
And everything,
Light and dark alike
Are set loose
Then, Magic!
My hand flies across the paper!
Sparks fly in the night!
In my heart.
And in my soul.
I take every emotion i have and shape it until it's beautiful.
The sky turns a dark shade of purple.
I notice this on a moments rest.
With a sad sigh i realize day will soon be upon me.
I re-cage all the wild feelings i set free.
For they are not for the eyes of others.
They myst wait for the night.........

,Penwing

[This message has been edited by Penwing (07-30-2009 03:09 PM).]

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1 posted 2009-07-28 04:18 PM


It's a wonderful feeling when something you pen just feels right.  Nicely done.

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Yoinn
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2 posted 2009-07-28 04:42 PM


I love poetry about poetry. Keep up the good work.

Yoin

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3 posted 2009-07-28 06:47 PM


Fine writing, Penwing. I also write better at night.
                               Ida

Penwing
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4 posted 2009-07-28 11:43 PM


thanks for the input guys.
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