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Heart2Heart
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0 posted 2009-07-28 03:31 PM





This lovely heirloom of varnished wood
Stands handsome in the hall
Gracing my home for many a year
Keeping perfect time for all

Its pendulums swing back and forth
As time just slips away
And on the hour a chord is struck
As music starts to play

Its face and hands are delicate
With filigree of gold
The numbers intricate and fine
As made in days of old

I love to listen to the chimes
Of my cherished grandfather clock
For often it seems to speak to me
Through its gentle, slow tick-tock

Tonight I think of days long gone
The happiness and tears
For it has gained a special place
Through all those passing years

It holds within its heart of oak
Beauty that lingers near
Providing in time-honoured ways
Its loving brand of cheer

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1 posted 2009-07-28 04:24 PM


Lovely!  I remember the clock in my Grandmother's hallway, and the sound as I read this.  Now that is a l-o-n-g time ago.

     
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WTBAKELAR
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2 posted 2009-07-28 05:00 PM


I absolutely loved this poem.
So personal and soft.
Like an old friend.

Very Nice indeed,
Tracey

jbstillwater
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3 posted 2009-07-28 06:20 PM


I love this one, Katriona...and I t hink I told you before that I have the exact same clock only it is in my dining room!

LOve th epoem, love the clock!!!!

Jan

LindsayP
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4 posted 2009-07-28 09:40 PM



Dear Katriona that is a beautiful poem, a real delight to read. I can understand the

pleasure you get from that stately heirloom
as we have one almost the same, one of our

most valued possessions. The rhyme and rythym are spot on. Very much enjoyed. Love

Lindsay

secondhanddreampoet
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5 posted 2009-07-28 09:43 PM


v. well written!

"Time flies? ... ah no,
  Time stays ... it is we that go!"

much applause for this fine 'penning' !

Robert E. Jordan
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6 posted 2009-07-28 10:29 PM


Yo dear Heart2Heart,

This is a nice clock Hon.  My brother-in-law put one of those together years ago.  He's dead now about twenty years.  He was my best friend, and introduced me to my wife.  He was a kind guy.  Your poem and picture brought him to mind.

Love Bobby  

Heart2Heart
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7 posted 2009-07-29 03:12 PM


Thanks ever so much everybody for your kind replies.  Yes those old clocks do become like beloved family members
Heart2Heart

Margherita
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8 posted 2009-07-30 06:49 AM


quote:
I love to listen to the chimes
Of my cherished grandfather clock
For often it seems to speak to me
Through its gentle, slow tick-tock



Most beautiful verse, dear Katriona. Clocks like this have a touch of majesty and "innate wisdom" I would say ... they have seen and recorded so much.

Inspiring and moving. Love this much.

Love,
Margherita

booky1940!
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9 posted 2009-07-31 06:44 PM


A fine 'poem' and the clock, it's a work of art!

Earth Angel
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10 posted 2009-07-31 07:09 PM


What a treasure! The clock, the poem, ~ and you! I got such a warm feeling of familiarity as I read along.
In the old homestead,~ built in 1821 and torn down to make way for a canal ~ which was never built!!!!) there wes every kind of grand clock imaginable. Oh, how I adored them all! You brought back some fond memories for me.
Presently we have an antique pendulum wall clock ~ but alas, it does not chime.

Katriona, your poetry is alway a joy to behold.



Love,
Linda

Oklahoma Rose
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11 posted 2009-07-31 08:49 PM


This is absolutely beautiful. Both, the clock and the poem. I love to hear the sound of a grandfathers clock.

Your poetry is always such a joy to read, Heart2Heart!

Marchmadness
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12 posted 2009-08-01 12:30 PM


What a lovely clock, Katriona. I see why you cherish it and would write such a beautiful poem about it. I just love the title of this one.
                              Ida

peaceseaker
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13 posted 2009-08-01 02:46 PM


Hi Kat...you know how beautifully written I thought this was before, and it is a gift to be able to relish in it again....Thank you.....peaceseaker
JamesMichael
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14 posted 2009-08-01 07:51 PM


Enjoyed...James
2islander2
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15 posted 2009-08-02 04:41 AM


Hello Katriona, I had a clock in my parents house while I was young, this is a beautiful homage to a beautiful piece of furniture so elegant and to the people who share time.
thanks for the poem.

yann

Heart2Heart
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16 posted 2009-08-03 05:40 AM


Thanks so much everybody for your very sweet replies.  This is not a picture of my clock, but it could well have been, they are very similar   Perhaps they were made by the same craftsman.
Heart2Heart

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