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Open Poetry #45
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Mcmust
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since 2009-07-09
Posts 17
TN
0 posted 2009-07-28 02:53 PM

Crossing the pond and through the trees
I saw nothing along the quietness
But the images of you
Passing one by one like waddling ducks
And feelings flapping like startled birds
From my many memories  
Soar up to my colorless heart

Only if there were a window
Or a door in my thought
That I could let you out

So to lose my weight

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since 2001-03-07
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1 posted 2009-07-28 04:25 PM

I sure have felt this way myself.  I hold memories for loved ones in there, and wish I could release them back from time and space.

Loved this.

     
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Penwing
Member
since 2009-07-27
Posts 73
Waverly, MN
2 posted 2009-07-28 05:01 PM

wow beautiful. it almost feels like a dream even as you read well done.

,Penwing
ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
3 posted 2009-07-28 07:10 PM

Powerful touch.
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