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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2009-07-27 07:30 PM


Love & Together

"For a period of time love & missing will seem all right, but as time passes for there to be pleasure
love & missing must give way to love & together, so love can take away the lonely nights."

I've had my share of love
and missing relationships,
relationships in which I've
cared for a woman but she is
consistantly away, and so I miss her
more and more with each passing day.
A relationship such as this is
fine for awhile, but after a
certain period of time has passed
they don't seem destined to last,
because love is something thats
meant to be shared. and even if
love is separated for a period of time,
love should find a way to be together
within the passing of time, and if too
much time passes and love doesn't find
its way to be, perhaps that was a love
that was never meant to be...
love & together.

JamesLee
25July
2009

  


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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2009-07-27 07:35 PM


You are so right, dear James, love at distance sometimes starves of the lack of enough togetherness.

Your island is a little bit isolated and the long way probably does not allow frequent travels.

Hopefully everything works out fine.

These are lovely, yet melancholic reflections.

Love,
Margherita

LindsayP
Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria
2 posted 2009-07-28 01:42 AM



This one is quite sad James not like your

usually happy love poems but never-the- less
you wrote it well. enjoyed.

Lindsay

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