navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #45 » A Poet's Tears of Love
Open Poetry #45
Post A Reply Post New Topic A Poet's Tears of Love Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
D.Lester Young
Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219
Austin, Tx

0 posted 2009-07-27 08:51 AM


A Poet's Tears of Love

Upon the morning mist of cyan blue bliss,
Can a poet’s tears spread rainbow’s kiss?
With nature’s golden rays blossoming pleasure
Of sunrise eyes in passion of delight’s treasure.

Upon the drought canvas bleached so white,
Can tears thoughts fall to contrast so right?
In characters mental depth perceptions insight,
Can letters sparkle black and white sunlight bright.

Upon the storm reigning down tears depressive fright,
Can flooding prayers arise hope, up in impressive flight?
Oh poet, spread your wings spirit across the Universe,
Where poetic Phoenix heartbeats create their Uni-Verse.

Upon dreams trailing tears, can hate be defeated with love,
Can our spirits reside in inspirational harmony with the doves?
Oh sail, sail with me, billowing inside that tranquil verse flow,
We are the destiny of our mind’s greatest potential growth glow.

B)
Upon tears Angel poet create your full spectrum miracle Poetry.
Poeta Nascitur, Non Fit (a poet is born, not made)

David Lester Young 07/27/09 © all rights owned by author
De-Terminated poet, somewhere in America not on company time

[This message has been edited by D.Lester Young (07-27-2009 09:23 AM).]

© Copyright 2009 David Lester Young - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2009-07-27 09:08 AM


quote:
Upon dreams trailing tears, can hate be defeated with love,
Can our spirits reside in inspirational harmony with the doves?



How exquisite! Yes, is my answer to the above question so beautifully expressed.

Love,
Margherita

D.Lester Young
Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219
Austin, Tx
2 posted 2009-07-27 09:44 AM


Margherita Thank You, may the doves of peace ride with your spirit of inspiration to the greatest heights.
jbstillwater
Member
since 2009-07-03
Posts 216
Albuquerque, New Mexico
3 posted 2009-07-27 01:46 PM


Dave

YOur poetry cararies with it a atouch of Kalil Gibran and Milton, only done in your own style with rhyme and the use of divine word-play.  You have a style that is very different and perhaps futuristic.

This poem is a great example of this.

Good writing!

Jan

Midnitesun
Deputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Empyrean
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647
Gaia
4 posted 2009-07-27 02:06 PM


Well done, poet. You sailed the blue sky with this poem.
D.Lester Young
Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219
Austin, Tx
5 posted 2009-07-27 03:05 PM


jbstillwater Thank You your words add magic to this dream writing poems.

Midnitesun Thank You for you also blessed me with hope.

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart
6 posted 2009-07-27 03:29 PM


tears to heal the world, you are a poetic prophet, just like Daniel, David, Jermemiah, Amos....

I agree with the above statements...

~ARH

D.Lester Young
Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219
Austin, Tx
7 posted 2009-07-27 04:20 PM


A Romantic Heart Thank You for your words do also bless me.

If in one poem, all poets voices could radiate love united in their uni-Verse of humanity into the whole Universe, would not God bless us with tranquility, at least for an instant moment illuminating peace.

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #45 » A Poet's Tears of Love

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary