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Open Poetry #45

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Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

0 posted 2009-07-26 07:54 PM

This pain wonÕt leave me,
And itÕs abundant on the weekend,
Through my clothes and tears,
That I am alone for better or worse.

Alone, as others retreat,
With their hands settled.

I want to fall back,
And be caught,
Told my hand wonÕt leave,
And I want to hold it so tight
That IÕll forget what itÕs like to be absent,
A lost wanderer, no more.

I donÕt know where to find her,
Where to look, how to connect,
And IÕm carving my name
Where the tree hides.

A scary thought to be alone,
When there doesnÕt seem like
There is much to live for.

Soul searching around
The soulless corner.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2009-07-27 09:02 AM

Very sad write, dear Tomer, good that you wrote the poem and shared it. I am sending you a hug, for you move me.

Maybe you need to interact a little bit more, reaching out to others who are lonely too.

Love,
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

2 posted 2009-07-29 12:10 PM

So sad. I am always glad to see you have popped in and shared with us.

Alison

D.Lester Young
Senior Member

since 2001-12-08

Posts 1219
Austin, Tx

3 posted 2009-07-29 12:20 PM

Deep emotion carved in strength of your verse.

I seen funny letters around your ' marks in your poem. Edit your work here and delete your ' and retype the ' that will solve the problem. I get these when I transfer from Microsoft Word.

Does anyone else see them?

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