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Beauty of the night....
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Beauty of the night.... |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia 
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Just some thoughts as I was travelling on a coach at night to visit my sister...  Car lights bounce their way thru the night Showcasing a tree’s beauty To a cast of thousands Who in turn sparkle with applause As the sun goes down And the moon comes out The stars ready their playground Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear RDB, Night time bus (coach) rides are always good material for poetry, and other writing. This is a fine poem, and I hope you had a good trip. Love Bobby |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
This is nice, lovely scenery, RDB~ |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Hello Roniece, I love your poem, it is very inspiring and beautifully inspired, you did a great job...Thanks a lot for your brilliant poem. yann |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
How absolutely charming this is, dear Roniece! Very beautiful thoughts, artfully put together. Love and hugs. Margherita |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Delightful, Roniece. Ida |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Roniece, beautiful scenes you have painted with you words my friend, loved the last three lines, very nice. Glad you had a nice weekend, take care. As the sun goes down And the moon comes out The stars ready their playground A lovely playground to have visited, thanks. Rick |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Roniece - bus rides are great when travelling. Nice write... BC |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
This is very beautiful, Roniece. I love to look at the stars at night. Although, I could see them alot better, when I lived out in the country. |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
As the sun goes down And the moon comes out The stars ready their playground Magic words my dear Roniece and you wrote it well, love to you dearLady. Lindsay |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Always enjoy reading your thoughts Roniece! Hope you had fun with your sis! (:  ARCTIC WIND |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I love this, darlin'. Very lovely. xoxoxo A |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"Showcasing a tree’s beauty To a cast of thousands" ahhh, lovely my friend.. |
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peaceseaker Member
since 2009-07-29
Posts 161 |
LOVED the images in this..thanks for sharing your travelers vision....peaceseaker |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
thank you everyone so very much... your warm and generous words have smiled my day RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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crosscountry83 Member
since 2009-07-30
Posts 345 |
The last line was my favorite. Beautiful poem. I think I want to go on a trip soon, maybe that would help me write :P Rileigh |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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