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secondhanddreampoet
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a 'Universalist' !

0 posted 2009-07-25 07:00 PM


clouds, stars, and dreams

tree-shadows marching
by this deep twilight lake.
fine silvered mountaintops
swept clean by moonlight
and the soft summer wind.
heart singing melody;
spirit in harmony.
nothing to grasp for
but clouds, stars, and
  dreams.

        --- b. e. adams (7/25/2009)


© Copyright 2009 Bruce E. Adams Jr. - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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Eternity
1 posted 2009-07-25 07:52 PM


Oh, yes let's grasp for those dreams, dear Bruce.

This is again wonderful!

Love,
Margherita

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
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Michigan, USA
2 posted 2009-07-25 08:27 PM


A picture of twilight solitude... many times the peaceful place I seek.
Well done.

D.Lester Young
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3 posted 2009-07-25 09:12 PM


To grasp the wind of the verse, and sail ots power, very nice
2islander2
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by the sea
4 posted 2009-07-26 03:37 AM


Hi Bruce, it is beautiful and well done, some vastness lurks in the images. a very enjoyable read.

yann

Alison
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5 posted 2009-07-28 01:21 AM


Bruce,

This just lifted me on the beauty of the words you wrote.

Thank you for a breath of calm.

Alison

Midnitesun
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Gaia
6 posted 2009-07-28 07:23 AM


"fine silvered mountaintops
swept clean by moonlight"
My favorite part.

Goldenrose
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7 posted 2009-07-28 07:26 PM


The beauty of night and nature, brought vividly to life by your words...

Thank you for those fine words...enjoyed reading them...

Goldenrose

Greeneyes
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In Your Poetic Mind
8 posted 2009-07-29 04:45 PM


you always bring nature and beautiful images together, such a pleasure to read you....

~~**~~
I never let one moment define me,
I define myself by all moments and how they teach and touch me......02  

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
9 posted 2009-08-01 08:23 AM


I am so glad I didn't miss this one, Bruce.

A perfect read for me today~~


M

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
10 posted 2009-08-01 11:43 AM


Bard Bruce, I find it amazing that you are able to continue to write about Nature's beauty and keep it fresh ~ and absolutely gorgeous! ~ Not that Nature doesn't give us an endless supply of 'gorgeousness' to write about ~ but to be able to do what you do, takes mucho talent and mucho love for 'Her'.

Love & Nature's Light,

Linda

Marchmadness
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11 posted 2009-08-01 11:55 AM


I agree with Linda, Bruce. I am always amazed at the power of your pen.
                                   Ida

secondhanddreampoet
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a 'Universalist' !
12 posted 2009-08-01 02:17 PM


As always, a profound thanks to all who
commented on this 'penning' !

[Actually, I believe it is really 'Gaia' writing
  these things ... simply using my most
  humble hand!]

peaceseaker
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since 2009-07-29
Posts 161

13 posted 2009-08-01 02:51 PM


"fine silvered mountaintops
swept clean by moonlight
and the soft summer wind."

Loved this image....found this to be a simple muse yet no more beautiful than most....enjoyed....peaceseaker

Oklahoma Rose
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14 posted 2009-08-01 07:34 PM


Oh, I love reaching for the clouds, stars and dreams.
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