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A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2009-07-25 03:47 AM





Icy chill, cold winds blow,
dark clouds overcast,
bare, empty streets,

Frozen ghosts, buried,
loneliness is comfort,
the only comfort found.

Sitting here, needing love,
freezing, wanting held,
to be someones "special",

My lovelight is slowly fading,
this journey has left me wondering,
if true love really exist,

I look around seeing mean faces,
filled with years of pain,
betrayal and deceit.

Worn faces, abrasions of time,
will I too become one of them?
a harden soul, mad at the world?

Why is it so hard to love?
time ends up changing us all,
good or bad, it shapes us.

It's lonely here in Russia,
tears are like snow falling,
frozen fragments of pain,

I want to travel home,
to warm and cozy arms,
arms that love and protect.

It's really cold here in Russia,
they are calling for a blizzard,
I wonder if I will make it out alive?

Or will I become one of the ghost?,
left to starve, to die,
frozen in the cold.


I dream in fantasy, because reality is scary~Millette (ARH)

© Copyright 2009 Millette A. (Lester) Addison - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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1 posted 2009-07-27 07:21 PM


Nice writing...James
Robert E. Jordan
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2 posted 2009-07-27 10:18 PM


Yo dear A Romantic Heart,

Russia is a northern nation.  Just like North America.  That's why the United States and Russia get along so well, titter-titter.  We're both just trying to survive the cold.  Climate means everything.

Bobby

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3 posted 2009-08-09 03:33 AM


My lovelight is slowly fading,
this journey has left me wondering,
if true love really exist,

Romantic Heart! wow I love winter poems and with the saga of love lost and love found, It makes Russia seem so real and chilly cold lol sounds like you needed a sleigh ride to cheer you up! lol
<3

In his mantle gray he walked one day across a shining floor and with crystal key in secrecy he opened an ivory door -J.R.R. Tolkien(T.Bombadil-the adv

martiniat8
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since 2003-06-21
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Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic
4 posted 2009-08-09 05:03 AM


What the hell are you doing in Russia?
that's like putting pepperoni on ice cream

XGarapanX
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Antarctica
5 posted 2009-08-09 11:07 AM


Well delivered. There were gentle tugs pulling at the strings of my heart throughout this poem.

·´~`·­»Brett«­·´~`·

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