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vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2009-07-24 06:45 PM

To My World

They say
It can be done
It can say
From all of this
It's all of love
There are certain things
sometimes we don't get
In life
We have to struggle
To get
Let my thought become only a memory
To live
To walk away
When your love show me
Your strength
To my world
It's hard to control a thing
In this world
We may find somethings
But me may be not
Where world goes around?
Where I find myself alone
In this world
My heart would yearn
And may earn
May learn
In this world

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

1 posted 2009-07-24 07:05 PM

vandana, a person with as much love in their heart as you have, should never be alone in this world.

EA

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

2 posted 2009-07-24 07:26 PM

Yo dear Vandana,

This poem works well in expressing your feelings. It's very well done.

Love Bobby

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

3 posted 2009-07-24 07:39 PM

"Where world goes around?
Where I find myself alone
In this world
My heart would yearn
And may earn
May learn
In this world"

LOVED this!

LindsayP
Member Elite

since 2007-07-28

Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria

4 posted 2009-07-24 11:41 PM

Yes good one Vandana, it makes me think,

It expresses your feelings.

Lindsay

Tim
Senior Member

since 1999-06-08

Posts 1794

5 posted 2009-07-25 12:37 PM

I enjoyed your poem. Nicely done,

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

6 posted 2009-07-25 02:37 AM

Dear vandana, you express your feelings well here. May love be your constant companion.

Love,
Margherita

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

7 posted 2009-07-25 06:01 PM

"Where world goes around?
Where I find myself alone
In this world
My heart would yearn
And may earn
May learn
In this world..............."

I really enjoyed this part as well

ARCTIC WIND

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

8 posted 2009-07-25 06:30 PM

Lovely thoughts, Vandana.
Ida

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

9 posted 2009-07-26 04:17 AM

hello Vandana, good to see you again, such a beautiful poem, your poem once again inspires me...I think there are two worlds here, one with and one without love, things aren't the same in these two worlds...

have a nice day

yann

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

10 posted 2009-07-26 05:12 PM

vandana - another great write from a gracious heart...

BC

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