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Open Poetry #45

solace of irma

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2009-07-24 08:04 AM

early then at the seam of a dreamer's day
from her solace of obsidian she dawns
a goddess of war in velvet whispered mantle

to melt the frozen eyes of the rocking men
and turn their voyeur's gauntlet into gravel
she moves as a dancer on slow sipped sounds

her eye side mystery is edged with distance
lest the prayers of the panting poets kindle
when the sighs of her skirt skin gather glances

she wears jaunty as if it were her skin bend
almost a smile glistens then occasional
before she is proper again with invisibility

and the leather men await again, irma's solace

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daark

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2009-07-24 10:05 AM

Haunting, dear D.!

Art has found an incredibly impressive way of expression in your poetic pennings.

Love,
Margherita

Anniepimm
Senior Member

since 2008-12-26

Posts 550
England

2 posted 2009-07-24 11:57 AM

Very interesting poem
I marvel at those that can write in this form
as I can not do it, so it is most enjoyable to read others,
Thank you
Annie

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

3 posted 2009-07-24 12:51 PM

ms mar, thanks lady friend

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ms annie, thank you so much

jbstillwater
Member

since 2009-07-03

Posts 216
Albuquerque, New Mexico

4 posted 2009-07-25 03:00 PM

What a writer you are!!!!!!One of the very best I have come across in some time and I am so thrilled that I have found you here on this site!!!

Huggs
Jan

As writers, we are artists who paint pictures from God

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

5 posted 2009-07-25 04:11 PM

Thanks JB...I appreciate your reads and comments..

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

6 posted 2009-07-28 01:18 AM

D,

... and you make me smile.

A

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

7 posted 2009-07-28 07:24 AM

ms ali-san, thank you for the smile little one

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