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A Beautiful Disaster Member
since 2007-01-13
Posts 409 |
"You've failed the writing" - you were told, And you gave up. You quit. I saw one more young talent fold, And they just laughed at it. If you are told life's hard to play, Your breath will still not cease. How one should breathe, one cannot say, As well as what to breathe. You generated thoughts in rhymes, The crowds wanted prose. You know, they get harsh at times From "truthful overdose". You proved yourself a zero, too - A zero with a core. And though your words are so damn true, You're nothing. Nothing more. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Wow, an intense situation! Never mind such writing 'experts'. Many of them are incapable of creating a memorable (or truthful) paragraph or stanza.  Your friend should keep pen and paper handy, and let the words flow....and BREATHE deeply from life's gifts. |
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Anniepimm Senior Member
since 2008-12-26
Posts 550England |
Excellent words penned in a most pleasing way very well written and most enjoyable poem Thank you Annie  |
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