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Open Poetry #45
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Ericc
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0 posted 2009-07-23 06:45 PM


Lessening,
Yet still a hint
Against
You.
I linger in the flesh of
Our illusions -
Eager for the moment we
Merge in letting go.



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Bill Charles
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1 posted 2009-07-23 06:53 PM

Ericc - nice to see you. Great writing leaving the reader with many thoughts...

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2 posted 2009-07-24 12:26 PM

Lovely writing.  Merging can be painful when it means a fork in life.

Thank you for sharing.
Alison
Margherita
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3 posted 2009-07-24 05:34 AM

Your heart shows here, dear Eric, and you envision a path of healing. "Merge in letting go", it can be done, dear Poet.

Very deep and beautiful.

Love and hugs.
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)
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