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Mcmust
Junior Member
since 2009-07-09
Posts 17
TN

0 posted 2009-07-23 04:20 PM


Wasn't it spring rain yesterday?
Thought it was not as soft as last year

Clouds are gone
The sky in my sunglasses
has got darker and darker

Your  last day
Has streched time into deep future

And was concentrted into this pen

Don’t stop
Keep writing

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angellea
Member
since 2009-03-29
Posts 144
NC, USA
1 posted 2009-07-23 05:23 PM


very thought provoking.

maranda

Mcmust
Junior Member
since 2009-07-09
Posts 17
TN
2 posted 2009-07-24 12:36 PM


Thank you!
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