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Fizzle
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since 2009-03-21
Posts 38


0 posted 2009-07-23 09:26 AM



Why does it halt?
Where is its flow?
When will it start
to unleash its flood?

Is glory possible?
What about freedom?
Is love feasible?
Is it oblivion?

Is there even a flood?
Is it not just vanity,
a wish that is sought
despite an essential inanity?

Where are the knights of old?
Or were they just the fabled bold?
Are we deceived?
Or do we taste defeat?

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It's been a while, hasn't it?


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Earth Angel
Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
1 posted 2009-07-23 11:03 AM


Haven't seen you around for awhile! I thought you must have 'fizzled' out! ~ Forgive me, I know that's a groaner.

You raise some interesting questions ~

"Where are the knights of old?" ~ Actually, pip has a few of them!

Giving you a warm, welcome-back pip hug,

EA

Fizzle
Junior Member
since 2009-03-21
Posts 38

2 posted 2009-07-23 01:18 PM


Haha, I'm used to those and the Snoop Dogg jokes.

Yes, it's been a bit dry lately. I think I've got some other stuff to post but I'm not sure.

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