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God's Hug
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God's Hug |
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D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
Whispering wishes in births blessing heartbeat miracle, Where God hugs us with celestial gifs of independence That must spread wings to record their unique chronicle, Guided by teacher parents adolescent close dependence. Some wants wing’s spirit programmed, clipped to discipline Ramparts inside closed minds cloned to conformed demeaning. Others question surrounding information within truth disciples To explore intuitive depth without limitations in concrete meanings. Miracles bless our paths individuality using intellectual autonomy That overcome natures and manmade obstacles of venom persecution, Where we are intimidated by Scar-let Letters Labels Tory autocracy, Where a political God does not hug in love, using hatred of segregation. But Liberal HeArts paint different pictures in passions of compassion That resonate quill’s vibration spectrums in dynamic divine inspiration, Where our soul’s harmony writes among harmonic heaven of inspiration Using His Universe and your Uni-Verse among Artmosphere demonstrations, Where God hugs this world. David Lester Young 07/22/09 © all rights owned by author De-Terminated poet, somewhere in America not on company time [This message has been edited by D.Lester Young (07-23-2009 12:37 AM).] |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
AWE~ I feel hugged....   |
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D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
A Romantic Heart Thank You yes we all have been hugged, and we need to use the gifts given us to make the world better. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good morning, DLY! "HeArts" "Artmosphere" ~ Clever! "God hugs us with celestial gifs" ~ Indeed He does! God's Love & Light, EA  |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo DLY, This poem is unclear in meaning. I'd try for more simplicity. BTW, God is not a hugger. Bobby |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: The soul does feel wrapped in divine love when it awakens to deeper perception. Passionate write. Love, Margherita  |
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D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
Earth Angel Thank You, Good morning Angel may your celestial gift explode today in that potential that shows your blessed talents of verse. Robert E. Jordan Thank You for your comment. You live in a city I love. Since I have weathered like a hundred dollar image, I went there visiting with my Ben Franklin image. I will return there soon. Margherita Thank You. Yes our souls are wrapped up with potentials. |
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