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Earth Angel
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0 posted 2009-07-22 06:11 PM


        

In Shangri-La
by Linda L. Dowd

In Shangri-La the rivers flow,
With milk and honey ~ smooth and slow.
The skies are clear and sapphire blue,
Each flower glows in rainbow hue.
Caressing zephyrs softly blow.

The stars at night set it aglow.
It’s heaven down on Earth below.
~ Where all is young and in renew.
     ~ In Shangri-La

A dreamscape, where I long to go.
~ But where it is, I do not know.
It is not legend. It is true,
For I have seen it in full view,
~ When I was there so long ago.
     ~ In Shangri-La.

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[This message has been edited by Earth Angel (07-22-2009 07:34 PM).]

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SEA
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1 posted 2009-07-22 06:25 PM


"The stars at night set it aglow.
It’s heaven down on Earth below.
~ Where all is young and in renew."


lovely!

brneyedgrly
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2 posted 2009-07-22 07:21 PM



soul~sister

i can't get enough of you

your writing is beautiful

and you are talented



love you

shel

Earth Angel
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3 posted 2009-07-22 07:37 PM


SEA ~

Now if only I can find it again! The clock is ticking!


EA

Earth Angel
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4 posted 2009-07-22 07:41 PM


My Brown-eyed Beauty ss ~

Can you help me find Shangri-La again? The only way I seem to access it is through my dreams ~ but that doesn't seem to stop Father Time. I have to go their in person! O' Deary me, where can it be?!?

Thank you for the sweet reply!

Love,
Linda ~ Lost & Searching...

Oklahoma Rose
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5 posted 2009-07-22 10:34 PM


Linda dear, this is beautiful, as always.

Brneyedgrly, I agree with you a 100%. She is indeed a very talented person.

LindsayP
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6 posted 2009-07-22 10:35 PM



My sweet Canadian Angel, the only thing that i'm sure would enhance that beautiful

picture is if you were standing under that rainbow as well. delightful, love you.

Lindsay

Earth Angel
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7 posted 2009-07-23 11:55 AM


Oklahoma's Finest Rose ~

What a sweet thing to say! Mind you, you ARE a rose and roses are sweet!

Thank you for the kind words, my dear friend! I appreciate them.

May your day be as precious as you are!

Love you!
Linda

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8 posted 2009-07-23 11:57 AM


Lindsay ~

Aw, Aussie Man, you always find the right words to fluff up my aura!

Ya nose eyes loves ya 2.
Linda Lou

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9 posted 2009-07-25 06:16 PM


LOVELY POST! ~ utopia sounds good right about now.


ARCTIC WIND

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10 posted 2009-07-25 06:21 PM


Master Wind ~

I'm waving my magic wand! You soon will be in Utopia! Enjoy the fligt on my angel wings!


EA

Margherita
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11 posted 2009-07-25 08:02 PM


The way you speak of it is a clear sign that you know it, dear Linda Angelo Terrestre, and you will find it I am totally positive about that!

Such sweetness and beauty flow here.


Love you,
Margherita

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12 posted 2009-07-25 09:18 PM


VERY nice!

[certainly wish I was there ... rather than
  trapped in this 'black  hole' of a 'reality'
  amid the "Runaway American Dream" !]

applause for this 'penning' !

Marchmadness
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13 posted 2009-07-25 11:46 PM


Sounds like my kind of place, Linda. You are the Earth Angel who can find it if anyone can.
                             Ida

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14 posted 2009-07-25 11:59 PM


i hope you know youve got killer flow
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15 posted 2009-07-26 03:44 AM


Hi Linda, I couldn't do a sonnet but it is my pleasure to read yours, this is lovely and seems a mysterious place..

The stars at night set it aglow.
It’s heaven down on Earth below.
~ Where all is young and in renew.
     ~ In Shangri-La
very well done.

yann

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16 posted 2009-07-26 10:55 AM


O la la...that's a dreamy place you write of.
Bill Charles
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17 posted 2009-07-26 05:13 PM


Linda - please point me in the direction, as I want to go there for a while...

BC

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18 posted 2009-07-27 05:13 AM


I'm sure if Shangri-La were half as beautiful as your words I would have been there long ago as well   Mesmerizing rondeau of high esteem, you do this classic style of poesy proud dear Linda.
Heart2Heart

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19 posted 2009-07-29 01:29 PM



ahh Linda Angel
your word dreams never fail

exquisite...

Earth Angel
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20 posted 2009-07-29 01:39 PM


Dolphina ~

Aw, yes, Margherita, I have dreamt of this place since I was a little 'cherub'.
When I find the portal again (mind you there are 3 portals ~ one of which is supposed to be in Siberia!) I will show you the way! We will never grow old and we will be able to laugh and play and have not a care in the world.

Tra la la la,

Linda Angelo Terrestre

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21 posted 2009-07-29 01:42 PM


shdp ~

Good morning, Bard Bruce! If you close your eyes and meditate for a wee bit, your essence can be transported there for a mini pick-me-up!


Linda

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22 posted 2009-07-29 01:47 PM


My dear Ida Belle ~

I search for the mystical pleace each time I close my eyes at night. When I do find it ~ and I WILL find it ~ I will light the way  for all my family and friends!

I'll be the Pied Piper of PipLand. lol

Sweet Shangri-lalalala dreams!

Linda Lou

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23 posted 2009-07-29 01:49 PM


norunnin ~

Does my words flow like "milk and honey"?  ~ Perhaps I'm getting to La La Land than I realized!

Thank you!


EA

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24 posted 2009-07-29 01:54 PM


Yann the Man ~

I like the sonnet poetic form as well. Actually, this poem is a Rondeau. It's a new form for me but I enjoyed wrapping my pen ~ and brain ~ around it!

As always, I appreciate your warm response!

Have a happy day!
Dream sweetly, this night!


Linda


Linda

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25 posted 2009-07-29 01:56 PM


BluesSerenade ~

A dreamy place, indeed. I've dreamt of such a place since I was about 5 years old. ~ One can go there in their dreams and when they meditate. The trick is in getting our bodies there as well!

Nice to hear from you, Lovely Lori!


Linda

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26 posted 2009-07-29 02:02 PM


BC ~

Bill, my dear friend, take my hand this night and I will transport our essences there for a little R & R. ~ A pit-stop, if you will! I can access it's spiritual presence but not its physical one. Once I do, I will share this living Utopia with all who would like to go there!


Linda

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27 posted 2009-07-29 02:05 PM


2

I believe that you have been there as well as I. We have just lost the spirit map to take us back there. ~ But we'll return, Dear Katriona! Soneday, we will return.

Until then, work on finding it's spirit home in your dreams at night.


Linda

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28 posted 2009-07-29 02:08 PM


Lady Kate!!! Where on God's green Earth have you been? ~ Have you been hanging out in Shangri-La?!? ~ and haven't been sharing?!? lol

So good to have you pip by for a little visit! Thank you for the kind words!


Linda

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29 posted 2009-07-31 06:01 PM


A pleasure to read and visit...James
Earth Angel
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30 posted 2009-07-31 08:04 PM


James ~

... and it is always a pleasure for you to read and visit my posts!

Thank you, Hawaii Man!


Linda

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