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Yoinn
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since 2007-08-16
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Michigan

0 posted 2009-07-22 01:46 PM



Love Drugged

Its in the way she moves
towards me in the dim moon light.
The way her hand flirts all the way to my brow.

I close my eyes at its touch.


Yoin

Just reworked my old poetry page. Check it out before geocities takes it down. Yoin

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OwlSA
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa
1 posted 2009-07-22 01:51 PM


Beautiful, Yoinn, and sensual - without making me feel uncomfortable and like a voyeur - or rather, voyeuse.  I really love this.

Owl

Yoinn
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2 posted 2009-07-22 01:54 PM


Thanks Owl,

I was writing a completly different poem when the vision of a hand slowing coming to my brow in the moonlight came to me. so I had to stop and write this one first. lol weird huh?

Yoin

Just reworked my old poetry page. Check it out before geocities takes it down. Yoin

brneyedgrly
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since 2009-06-08
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nowhere and everywhere
3 posted 2009-07-22 07:23 PM






Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
4 posted 2009-07-23 03:32 PM


Yoinn - deliciously delicious...

BC

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2009-07-24 06:19 PM


Nice...James
Yoinn
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6 posted 2009-07-24 11:21 PM


Thanks for that little yellow smooch berney.

Yoin

Yoinn
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7 posted 2009-07-24 11:21 PM


Thanks Bill and James for your replies.

Yoin

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