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Johan
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since 2009-05-13
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Lincolnshire, England U.K.

0 posted 2009-07-22 10:57 AM



For All Our Warriors


From the badlands of Helmand Province
To the rose strewn gate of peace
The choir's voices rise above the village spires
As in the graveyards others sleep

The flag of pity draped across the coffin
As his brothers carry his grief
Walk step in stride to the vestry
With his battered headgear as a wreath

No poetry can offer this sacrifice
But just words that say it all
He fought,he died for others
On the battlefield he did fall

Let our brothers not be forgotten
Let his enemy know our sorrow
Let all carry an olive branch this day
For some there is no tomorrow.

© Copyright 2009 Andrew Shiston - All Rights Reserved
Heart2Heart
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since 2009-05-15
Posts 738
Scotland/Norway
1 posted 2009-07-22 11:08 AM


Incredibly moving Andrew, you are writing immensely beautiful poesy these days
I loved every line of the wonderful stanzas.
Katriona

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825
by the sea
2 posted 2009-07-22 12:06 PM


hello Johan this is poignant, some sacrify themselves for a cause, a country and they deserve both respect and love, your poem is a beautiful and sharp homage to people that served others in the extreme...Thanks for the poem.

yann

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