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SEA
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0 posted 07-21-2009 10:07 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for SEA


         



you should have held me.

I waded out too deep…
didn’t see, you… didn’t see
and now it’s too late

I am carried away
in foreign currents
and treading
isn’t the custom here…

you know deep waters scare me
and that I prefer the beach.


~SEA~
*thank you Paul, for inspiring...  http://piptalk.com/pip/Forum110/HTML/001074.html
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viking_metal
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1 posted 07-21-2009 10:15 PM       View Profile for viking_metal   Email viking_metal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for viking_metal

I don't think that I've ever inspired anyone before.


Neato burrito.


Great write.

Thirty bits of glass had become my teeth,
They were breaking each and every time I tried to speak.

BluesSerenade
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2 posted 07-21-2009 10:31 PM       View Profile for BluesSerenade   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BluesSerenade

Me too, me too!  
Love this little beach scene, SEA gal!
nakdthoughts
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3 posted 07-22-2009 07:26 AM       View Profile for nakdthoughts   Email nakdthoughts   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nakdthoughts

lovely inspiration Susan~~

M
2islander2
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by the sea


4 posted 07-22-2009 09:05 AM       View Profile for 2islander2   Email 2islander2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for 2islander2

lovely write, enjoyed it and its sentiments so sweetly expressed.

yann
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5 posted 07-22-2009 09:06 AM       View Profile for Margherita   Email Margherita   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Margherita

Very lovely, in perfect alignment to Paul's inspiring poem.

Love,
Margherita
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6 posted 07-22-2009 09:24 AM       View Profile for WTBAKELAR   Email WTBAKELAR   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for WTBAKELAR

SEA,  What a beautiful picture/poem compilation,  Subtle and sweet thoughts, and a nice continuing of the inspriation poem.

Gotta love the beach,
Tracey.
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7 posted 07-22-2009 11:40 AM       View Profile for Chalmette Guy   Email Chalmette Guy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Chalmette Guy

Hell, if others get bumped, this deserves a "bump" for sure SEA.
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8 posted 07-22-2009 11:44 AM       View Profile for Alison   Email Alison   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alison

Most beautiful.  I am happy it came back up for me to read.

xoxoxo
A
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9 posted 07-22-2009 02:25 PM       View Profile for Rick   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Rick's Home Page   View IP for Rick

Dear Sea, loved this write my friend, I felt the moment and the thoughts, enjoyed, thank you.

Rick
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10 posted 07-22-2009 02:34 PM       View Profile for Heart2Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Heart2Heart

Pure loveliness contained in a delicately and tenderly written poem, I especially adored the following:

I am carried away
in foreign currents
and treading
isn’t the custom here…

Heart2Heart
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11 posted 07-22-2009 03:51 PM       View Profile for unboundpoetess   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for unboundpoetess

My fave too, Heart...

Aren't you just lovely here!
Adored,
Heather
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12 posted 07-22-2009 06:53 PM       View Profile for Temptress   Email Temptress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Temptress

Yep the beach is sometimes safer. Love ya miss ya! Enjoyed

"...buried way beneath the sheets
I think she's having a meltdown..."
"Buckcherry"

Artic Wind
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13 posted 07-22-2009 06:58 PM       View Profile for Artic Wind   Email Artic Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artic Wind

I ALWAYS LOVE YOUR POETRY!!!! ~ BEAUTIFUL!!!


ARCTIC WIND
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14 posted 07-22-2009 07:13 PM       View Profile for brneyedgrly   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for brneyedgrly


this is some great writing sea

i really like it



shel

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15 posted 07-22-2009 09:16 PM       View Profile for Mysteria   Email Mysteria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mysteria

Go figure now the ... is there instead of what I saw

Well, it is just a beautiful poem any way you look at it Sea.
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16 posted 07-22-2009 10:29 PM       View Profile for Midnitesun   Email Midnitesun   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Midnitesun

I love it when poets inspire other poets and they come up with things like this!
Bravo, to you and to Paul for gifting us these two fine beauties.
LindsayP
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17 posted 07-22-2009 11:17 PM       View Profile for LindsayP   Email LindsayP   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LindsayP


Dear Susan you have written a very touching

poem here my dear, most enjoyable, love

Lindsay
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18 posted 07-23-2009 01:39 PM       View Profile for Earth Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Earth Angel's Home Page   View IP for Earth Angel

Ooops! I just realized that when I followed your link to Paul's poem, I neglected to reply to yours!

I suppose one could say that this poem is about SEA drifting out to sea...

May you always find your way back to a sandy shore.  


Linda
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19 posted 07-23-2009 03:42 PM       View Profile for Bill Charles   Email Bill Charles   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bill Charles

SEA - a most enchanting write, by an enchanting poetress...

BC
 
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