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Yoinn
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0 posted 2009-07-21 08:22 PM


a heavy sigh drops
another memory

I relinquish them
one by one

I pray you
understand your death.

Yoin


Just reworked my old poetry page. Check it out before geocities takes it down. Yoin

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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
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1 posted 2009-07-21 10:10 PM


Left a mark.  Very strong and concise.

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2 posted 2009-07-21 10:13 PM


wow...

each time I read you, I want to read more

brneyedgrly
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3 posted 2009-07-21 11:00 PM



this is brilliant, yo

love,    
berney


Yoinn
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4 posted 2009-07-23 02:48 PM


I hope that mark isn't a bruise lol thanks for commenting.  TD.

Yoin

Just reworked my old poetry page. Check it out before geocities takes it down. Yoin

Yoinn
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5 posted 2009-07-23 02:51 PM


thank you Sea,

With all these kind people commenting on my stuff it really makes me want to write more. What a great poetry site this is.

Yoin

Just reworked my old poetry page. Check it out before geocities takes it down. Yoin

Yoinn
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6 posted 2009-07-23 02:52 PM


Berney lol you know just what to say to make me all warm inside lol

Yoin

Just reworked my old poetry page. Check it out before geocities takes it down. Yoin

Marchmadness
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7 posted 2009-07-23 05:49 PM


People comment on your poetry because it is very good, Yoinn,
                                 Ida

Yoinn
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8 posted 2009-07-23 08:27 PM


thank you Ida,

I appreaciate you saying that.

take care

Yoin

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