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Heart2Heart
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since 2009-05-15

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0 posted 2009-07-21 03:03 PM

My lips have made their mind up
I'm sure they want your kiss
Although yours taste of ketchup
My lips have made their mind up
So please put down your tea cup
There's no better time than this
My lips have made their mind up
I'm sure they want your kiss

Chalmette Guy
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since 2009-03-11

Posts 1257
Louisiana

1 posted 2009-07-21 03:49 PM

Thematic material suits you well, you should do more like this.

Heart2Heart
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since 2009-05-15

Posts 738
Scotland/Norway

2 posted 2009-07-21 04:02 PM

Thanks Chalmette, I've written lots of this kind of stuff. A triolet is fun to write, try it yourself, you can see the obvious and how to do it.

PS: Haven't started to post my sonnets yet

So get your pen sharpened, I love all kinds of critique

Katriona

brneyedgrly
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since 2009-06-08

Posts 1125
nowhere and everywhere

3 posted 2009-07-22 12:01 PM

i would love to have tea with you lady

shellie

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

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Eternity

4 posted 2009-07-22 06:41 AM

Now, that's cute, dear Katriona!

That must have been some desire ... to even risk to kiss ketchup lips

Love,
Margherita

Heart2Heart
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since 2009-05-15

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5 posted 2009-07-22 06:54 AM

Thanks Shellie, just a litle thing I made up during a lunch break

Katriona

Heart2Heart
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Scotland/Norway

6 posted 2009-07-22 06:55 AM

Oh yes, now that might be true Margherita, hehe, thanks m'dear

Katriona

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

7 posted 2009-07-22 09:03 AM

what woman want, God wants, (does this french proverb exist in english ?), Hello again Katriona, this is a touching poem so sweet and sharing...Enjoyed very much.

yann

Heart2Heart
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since 2009-05-15

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Scotland/Norway

8 posted 2009-07-22 10:36 AM

Oh I'm not sure about that one Yann, but anyway this was fun writing and pretty easy to do. Thanks dear friend.
Katriona

Balladeer

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since 1999-06-05

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9 posted 2009-07-22 12:52 PM

Triolets are very interesting to write, especially the expanded ones.

You do them justice

SEA

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since 2000-01-18

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with you

10 posted 2009-07-22 01:02 PM

this is SO cute!!

what a fun read

Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16

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So. El Monte, California

11 posted 2009-07-22 01:24 PM

Love exploring the different sides of your poetry, Heart2Heart. Delightful.
Ida

Heart2Heart
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since 2009-05-15

Posts 738
Scotland/Norway

12 posted 2009-07-22 02:36 PM

Thanks so much to every one of you for responding so sweetly to this little ditty, I appreciate your kind words.
Heart2Heart

D.Lester Young
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since 2001-12-08

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Austin, Tx

13 posted 2009-07-22 03:54 PM

A kiss of poetry in a bliss presentation.

Heart2Heart
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since 2009-05-15

Posts 738
Scotland/Norway

14 posted 2009-07-22 06:09 PM

Glad you found this little breezy thing blissful Lester. Thanks dear friend.
Katriona

Oklahoma Rose
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since 2008-02-28

Posts 1586
Oklahoma USA

15 posted 2009-07-22 11:27 PM

Wow! This is a fantastic triolet. You are a wonderful poet.

LindsayP
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since 2007-07-28

Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria

16 posted 2009-07-22 11:38 PM

That is one cute poem dear Katriona

much enjoyed. love

Lindsay

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