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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. One may spend His whole life This side of the page In other men’s dreams Know nothing of True love or courage Except what he sees On a theatre screen How fortunate then Should that chance come Who answers well Despite the fear to give However unknown To eternity his moment In time Another star However faint To light the night— A single tree Against the sky . |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
beautiful, the last verse is extraordinary . yann |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Your poems at first appear simple and yet they are so complex, a credit to your poetic skill. Ida |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Yes, you write with an extraordinary pen, and your poetry is so fine tuned. Enjoyed, very much so. |
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