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Klassy Lassy
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0 posted 2009-07-20 08:56 PM




orbed and drifting dewdrop
borne on astral stream, I'm fluted summer satin
song winging on a dream


ancient etch of love line
whispered ballad strung, pearled incantation
the breathless rise of sun


Oh! perfect storm
deepened sweet, beneath a trembling calm
lyrics burn upon my breast, captivated alms


swift singe of solitude,
tears scroll without warning, seal your kiss upon my lips
your heart upon my morning


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unboundpoetess
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1 posted 2009-07-20 09:04 PM


wow

You stun with this

orbed and drifting dewdrop
borne on astral stream, I'm fluted summer satin
song winging on a dream

and this

swift singe of solitude,
tears scroll without warning, seal your kiss upon my lips
your heart upon my morning

You've plucked this one from some ethereal realm...yowza.

L,
Heather


Klassy Lassy
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2 posted 2009-07-20 10:02 PM


Heather, Thank you for that smile and the happy response!  
...magical those ethers.  

Earth Angel
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3 posted 2009-07-20 11:13 PM


Well, m'dear Klassy One, this one was surely worth the wait!!! Thy quill doth hath a feather's touch.

"song winging on a dream" ~ indeed!



Linda



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4 posted 2009-07-21 01:27 AM


   Hi, sweet Angel of gossamer gardens.  With your wings, you would certainly know about that!  

I thought I saw you swinging on a star and listening to the cosmos sigh.


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5 posted 2009-07-21 11:01 AM


Very beautiful - it's magical like storms so often are.

A

Chalmette Guy
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6 posted 2009-07-21 11:13 AM


This is very cool and beautiful and fun to read.
BluesSerenade
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7 posted 2009-07-21 07:48 PM


Oh this is very special, it just tugs at the heart so gently.

Beautiful work, Klassy Lassy~  and it's good to read you again.

brneyedgrly
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8 posted 2009-07-21 11:54 PM



your writing is delicate and beautiful



shel


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9 posted 2009-07-22 11:25 PM


A very beautiful poem, Klassy Lassy!
Klassy Lassy
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10 posted 2009-07-23 12:28 PM


Alison, Storms often have silver linings, nes pas?  
````````  

Chalmette Guy, it's a soft touch poem, so I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thank you.
`````````

Blues Serenade,     It has a been a while, but I'm glad to be able to share here once in a while!  hugs
`````````

Hello Shel,  I'm glad to meed you here!  We have a member in my family we call Chell, too.  It has such a soft charm to it.  (But sometimes they call her Mac, as well.  LOL)  I appreciate your gentle comment.  
``````````

Oklahoma Rose,  Thank you for taking time for my poem.  
~~~~~~~~~

I've been enjoying the creative talents of you all and the time you share with me.  ~KL
  


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11 posted 2009-07-23 12:51 PM


OK, so I'm keeping this one.
Gorgeous "classy" write.

Klassy Lassy
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12 posted 2009-07-23 01:06 AM


Midnitesun....    Thank you, luv!  I've been thinking of you...  Hugs!
Margherita
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13 posted 2009-07-23 11:27 AM


This is simply awesome, the whole of it, dear Klassy Lassy!

Good to read you again!

Love,
Margherita

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14 posted 2009-07-23 03:09 PM


so stunning and alluring, klassy. i rather enjoyed this.

maranda

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15 posted 2009-07-23 03:30 PM


Klassy Lassy - this is one Klassy write, lovely...

BC

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16 posted 2009-07-23 04:05 PM


Margherita   Thank you. It's always lovely to be missed, and I am happy to see you, too.  ~~Karen
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17 posted 2009-07-23 04:10 PM


Maranda, It's my pleasure, to have you read something I wrote.  Thank you.  
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Bill, aww, thank you, too, for reading and the compliment.  I'm happy it was received well.     

Marchmadness
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18 posted 2009-07-24 09:41 AM


Stunningly beautiful, Karen.
                           Ida

Klassy Lassy
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19 posted 2009-07-24 12:14 PM


Ida, thank you and good morning!  

[This message has been edited by Klassy Lassy (07-25-2009 04:13 AM).]

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20 posted 2009-08-08 08:49 AM


KL...a tempest in a teapot indeed...
the imagery of a perfect storm
can sometimes be very frightening.
Yet, you've romanticized is wonderfully.

And...thanks for checking in on me!




Klassy Lassy
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21 posted 2009-08-08 10:18 AM


Sunshine, it is my pleasure and always a treat to read the beauty in your poems.  Thank you, dear heart for the touch.

  kl

brneyedgrly
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22 posted 2009-09-17 12:04 PM



           I want more klassy

                  

found this in my library and loved it again

                  shel


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23 posted 2009-09-17 02:16 PM


Absolutely beautiful, Klassy Lassy. Keeper.
                                 Ida

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