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secondhanddreampoet
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0 posted 2009-07-20 05:42 PM


       Samsara (#2)
     [‘wandering on’]

everywhere …
dewdrops by moonlight
in this tree-shadow forest.
long vanished stars twinkle
from a deep-time dream.
universal harmony reigns
for the pathless wanderer.

         --- b. e. adams (7/20/2009)

© Copyright 2009 Bruce E. Adams Jr. - All Rights Reserved
Marchmadness
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1 posted 2009-07-20 08:40 PM


"Everywhere...
Dewdrops by moonlight."
Sounds like a dream.
A lovely place to linger for a while.
                                  Ida

[This message has been edited by Marchmadness (07-21-2009 01:33 AM).]

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2 posted 2009-07-21 12:02 PM


Dreamy...

"universal harmony reigns" ~ Awwww, totally sublime.


Linda

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3 posted 2009-07-21 06:28 AM


Still feel the peace wrapping me in its soothing cloak while reading this uniquely beautiful poem.

Love,
Margherita

2islander2
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4 posted 2009-07-21 12:43 PM


deep sensations here, sensations are the best of life I think.

thanks for the poem.

yann

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5 posted 2009-07-21 11:25 PM


Bruce,

You wander beautifully and see the world with an artist's eye.

Alison

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6 posted 2009-07-22 04:52 AM


I am that pathless wanderer living in the views along the way.
nakdthoughts
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7 posted 2009-07-22 07:36 AM


it's funny how even though I am here for now, I am in a continuous wander~~ if you know what I mean~~


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with you
8 posted 2009-07-22 06:03 PM


you know I like this
JamesMichael
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9 posted 2009-07-22 07:21 PM


Nice...James
secondhanddreampoet
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10 posted 2009-07-23 03:01 PM


Thanks so much ... to all who commented on this 'write' ... greatly appreciated !!


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