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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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you had savored the music sounds somewhere before and when you brought your sighs to my window your wore only your forest of woman songs like tall hollow trees under the lips of wind moan music swallowed in flute glass shapes your throat was a swan song crying of love the dragons of my leather were docile hounds you patted their eyes with your smile the hem of your godiva scented them in lavender they writhed to be restless against the moon but your ribbons were gossamer fetterings and your laughter left locked freedom undone then with dawn you were but yesterday again ________________ daark (forbidden) |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Enchanting, dear D.! Nothing compares to you, Poet! Love, Margherita  |
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Heart2Heart Senior Member
since 2009-05-15
Posts 738Scotland/Norway |
You have some truly great descriptions in your poem dear poet, this is only one which I enjoyed very much: "the dragons of my leather were docile hounds" You show great imagination in your poetry, always it is so colourful and full of fascination. Heart2Heart |
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unboundpoetess Member
since 2008-05-24
Posts 477 |
Hey D You and your comely dragon whisperer make silky paper music. Love your sounds, H |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Beautiful. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar, thank you special lady friend. ________________ Heart2heart, thank you so much for your touch here. _____________________ ms UBP, thank you lady friend for the soft sly smile _______________ ms K..thank you little one.. |
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bel1e Senior Member
since 2006-07-24
Posts 1631 |
~love the ethereal feel to this, dark one~ |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I read this and I read this - and each time, I fall in love with it just a little bit more. It's like a fairy tale of words wrapped around the touch of your poetic mind. May I say that I love this? Because .. I do. So there!  Alison |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms bel1e, thanks naughty daughter.. _____________ ms ali-san, thanks little one |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
ah, the leather and lace of gossamer fetterings her laughter unlocking freedom's letterings gifts not bound to beg, steal, or borrow a yesterday memory...knew song of tomorrow ...liked this breath of wind, Dark One! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Kl you always make me smile with your views. Thanks babe |
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angellea Member
since 2009-03-29
Posts 144NC, USA |
moan music swallowed in flute glass shapes...your words grab me everytime, dear dark. maranda |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thanks ms maranda.. |
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