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benfitofhtedout
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since 2009-07-19
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0 posted 2009-07-19 11:42 PM



Black Night Sky
You are beautiful
Majestic
Undaunting
Hypnotizing
I could stare
For a life time
For if I don't
I fell I may lose you
But yet I must
For yet it is late
And slumber drags
On thy weary eyes
but wait
What is this?
Something is wrong
Something is not quite right
But what is it?
I will not rest till I find out
Even if it means my life
i will find out and fix it
For if I don't
I fear that our relationship
Will end...
Now that the search has began
I see a light
It is evil
It is not like the morning sun
For it is not time
Not yet
But what is it?
i can not figure it out
But i know it is close
There!
There it is!
But...
But it is out of my grasp
Even beyond the lost of my life
For yet it is the city
I can not fix this
So I am sorry
Our relationship will end
I am truly and deeply sorry
That I can do nothing to save us
But I will never forget
That you are my
Black Night Sky



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1 posted 2009-07-20 02:11 AM


A very enjoyable poem for your first posting.  Please check your email for a special welcome from us here, and ...

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Margherita
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2 posted 2009-07-20 08:56 AM


Makes me think of light pollution and of my attempts to see the stars despite the many lamps etc....

Enjoyed your first entry, welcome to Pip!

Love,
Margherita

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