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A Click Clack Journey
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A Click Clack Journey |
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Yoinn Senior Member
since 2007-08-16
Posts 649Michigan 
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A Click Clack Journey Goodbye fingers Tap yellow windows Scenery is slow to go by Her promise waves her hand With memories pocketed A kiss on a cross Life’s options whisper In lonely ears A click clack journey Into hills of stories With only a writers Eye to preserve it all With a single step He stumbles into His lessons of Life, love and loss. Five years he listened For the bullet that sang his name. All the beauty, He left behind in the train smoke. A click clack journey Through yellow windows Her promise and a cross Waves his hand. Yoin Just reworked my old poetry page. Check it out before geocities takes it down. Yoin [This message has been edited by Yoinn (07-20-2009 05:18 AM).] |
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martiniat8 Senior Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 897Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic |
Simply amazing. I'm quite fond of writing train poems myself. |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Yoinn, Splendid! This might be my favorite of yours. Alison |
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Yoinn Senior Member
since 2007-08-16
Posts 649Michigan |
thank you martiniat8 Trains have a certain appeal to me too. I grew up not to far from a railroad track and many times watched the train go by and i would dream up stories about its travel. Yoin Just reworked my old poetry page. Check it out before geocities takes it down. Yoin |
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Yoinn Senior Member
since 2007-08-16
Posts 649Michigan |
Thank you Alison, I just sat down yesterday and started free forming it, using my right brain to write and this came out. I didn't even know it was a train poem until the stanza. lol Yoin Just reworked my old poetry page. Check it out before geocities takes it down. Yoin |
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