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kudanesh
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0 posted 2009-07-19 01:47 PM



I really do need a new start
Any where away from here
Before I fall apart

Some where away from the things I fear
And the old parts of me I hate
Even the things that I hold dear

I haven’t decided on a date
But it really needs to be soon
Other wise I feel it will be too late


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Margherita
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1 posted 2009-07-19 02:09 PM


Dear Andrew, sometimes we need a change no doubt. There is this tone of urgency in your well written words.

By accepting our weaknesses and the "parts we hate" we can let them go and move ahead, loving ourselves. We can't escape from ourselves, so we better face the challenges of life and we will feel better.

Love,
Margherita



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2 posted 2009-07-19 02:13 PM


Me too!
Earth Angel
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3 posted 2009-07-19 02:16 PM


Andrew, I would like to echo Margherita's reply ver batim! Every word she said, I concur with. I swear she reads my mind!

Sending some loving, healing energy your way,

EA

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