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In My Dreams. |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. 
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Where are you, imaginary girl? Thick legs, slight clefts between the muscles near the knee. what have they done to you, imaginary girl? Dark hair, feathered at the tips and hanging below your shoulders. why are you engaged to unhappiness, imaginary girl? If only you could see what I have seen. ___________________________________ Bad Habits. Thirty bits of glass had become my teeth, |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I think that you should share what you have seen with your unhappy, imaginary girl. Gosh, Paul, you're even observant in your dreams! ~ "Thick legs, slight clefts between the muscles near the knee." lol Sweet dreams!  Linda  |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
nice poem, questioning made me curious...thanks for the lovely poem. yann |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
EA. Thank you.  Islander... You are too kind. Thank YOU for reading. Thirty bits of glass had become my teeth, |
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unboundpoetess Member
since 2008-05-24
Posts 477 |
Intriguing last line, Paul. Enjoyed you, Heather |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
~i hope you find her soon, paul  don't wait for the storms to end~ |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Paul, I love your poetry (burp) more and more and more. You is a very goot riter. Yep. A |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
 liked this very much Paul |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
Heather... Thank you. Very much. Brown eyes... I hope SHE finds ME.  Alaboo... Thank you. Always so supportive. Thank you. SEAsoup... Thanks! Thirty bits of glass had become my teeth, They were breaking each and every time I tried to speak. [This message has been edited by viking_metal (07-19-2009 09:51 PM).] |
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