Uni-Verse Love Sonnet Delight

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Open Poetry #45

Uni-Verse Love Sonnet Delight

D.Lester Young
Senior Member

since 2001-12-08

Posts 1219
Austin, Tx

0 posted 2009-07-17 10:29 PM

Uni-Verse Love Sonnet Delight

Stars radiate the Uni-Verse
Springing heaven in love verses
Sailing solar wing traversal
Spreading quills power so diverse,
Spectrum dynamics in bliss terse,
Sensual kiss anniversary.

Light of heartbeats desires spring glow
Dance within desires delight blows.
Holding heated passion that grows
Upon eyesight caressed light flow
Transparent affection nightglow,
Soul mate intertwined so mellow.

Two as one climatic moment
Big Bang of Uni-Verse’s presence.

David Lester Young 07/17/09 © all rights owned by author
De-Terminated poet, somewhere in America not on company time

[This message has been edited by D.Lester Young (07-17-2009 11:40 PM).]

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2009-07-18 12:05 PM

This radiates with a certain kind of bliss that sparkles ever so brightly.

Nice light to read by~~

D. Lester~

D.Lester Young
Senior Member

since 2001-12-08

Posts 1219
Austin, Tx

2 posted 2009-07-18 12:22 PM

BluesSerenade Thank You and I am glad you enjoyed it, blessings.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

3 posted 2009-07-18 02:48 PM

Lot's of fun going on here!
Enjoyed the Uni-verse

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

4 posted 2009-07-18 03:02 PM

"Soul mate intertwined so mellow."
~ Awww, yes! Totally sublime!

"Two as one climatic moment
Big Bang of Uni-Verse’s presence."

Well now, I think I prefer your version of the "Big Bang" theory!

D.Lester Young
Senior Member

since 2001-12-08

Posts 1219
Austin, Tx

5 posted 2009-07-18 04:02 PM

ThisDiamond Thank You yes there is lot's of fun going on here, blessings.

Earth Angel Thank You I was writing and trying to figure out an ending to find those "Big Bang" words of double meanings, blessings.

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