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bernardmarshall
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0 posted 2009-07-17 06:52 PM



The moment Earth shined bright - 20 July 1969

When down that ladder Armstrong came
and paused before that step of fame
we held our breath a moment deep
before mankind would take that leap

What did you feel that July night
as witness to that unique sight
when TV beamed mans giant leap
back home to us on sofa seat

It was unreal - to share this sight
or to compare grandparents "flight"
when cars and the electric light
had just appeared - with Brothers' Wright

And now just decades from that start
Apollo used 5 million moving parts
to reach this dream of man so bright
with "Can do" spirit at its height

Unreal and real but no big tears
as Sixties man raced through his fears
of change which flew in his story
and moved his spirit - you and me

Now with the moon now in our sight
there rose a Sixties joy so bright  
Beach Boys - Beatles music everywhere
- creative tumult in the air

Who can forget that sharp new feel
when Sgt Pepper and A Whiter Shade of Pale were real
and flower power - the fresh appeal
to universal youth and high ideal

Such Transatlantic energy
that moved a Mayflower and a Kennedy
and built a land where men were free
now led mankind to this new peak of liberty

Now as we shared this TV sight
and man walked on the moon that night
we saw a new discovery
- our Earthrise in great majesty

Bernard - 4 July 2009
bernardmarshall@hotmail.com


(PS After writing this and walking out into the sunny street -Serendipity!
A 1960's open top Ford Mustang drives by with 4 smiling
faces
flying the biggest Stars and Stripes that one could see
on Princess Way to Wimbledon Tennis right in front of me

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2009-07-17 07:08 PM


And, Bernard, look at what all has transpired since that wonderful, moving, historic moment, not only in life, but in technology, all because of a Dream.

Dreams Live!

Welcome to Passions!

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KRJ

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2 posted 2009-07-17 07:18 PM


Thanks for sharing this!
Welcome to Pips, where poets mesmerized by that moon reveal a myriad of intellectual and emotional connections to the golden orb.
Yes, I watched that moment in 1969, in awe.

BluesSerenade
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3 posted 2009-07-17 07:19 PM


What a great tribute you have penned here. It was indeed, a time and place in our history like none other.

I was watching a documentary of sorts with a man who was a part of it all so many years ago.  He went on to say that one of his fondest
memories was walking out to the parking lot at days end and looking over his shoulder at the full moon rising, and the reality of that giant leap.

Thanks for this very special poem, and welcome to Passion.

angellea
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4 posted 2009-07-17 11:14 PM


a whiter shade of pale-one of my favorite songs.

welcome to pip!

maranda

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5 posted 2009-07-18 04:18 PM


40 years ago?!? Say it isn't so!!! My gosh, how time flies!

What a fabulous First Post! I thoroughly enjoyed this trip down Memory Lane.

~ Regarding your added comment, yes, indeed that was "serendipitous"!

Giving you a warm, welcoming pip hug,

Earth Angel

Margherita
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6 posted 2009-07-18 04:39 PM


quote:
Now as we shared this TV sight
and man walked on the moon that night
we saw a new discovery
- our Earthrise in great majesty



Beautiful first entry! That Earthrise was indeed unforgettable!

Welcome to Pip!

Love,
Margherita

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