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Billie Cullimore
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since 2009-03-27
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0 posted 2009-07-17 03:16 AM


   Just for the fun of it I am submitting the first poem I had published I was 7 (seven) years old and the poem was in a magazine called Wee Wisdom.


                     Kitty
                       By Billie (age 7)

                I have a little kitty
             Her coat is white and gray.          
          She follows me around the house.
              And always wants to play.

             Her fur is nice and shiny
              And just as soft as silk.
            I guess she keeps it that way
              By drinking lots of milk.
  
                      *******

© Copyright 2009 Billie Cullimore - All Rights Reserved
Anniepimm
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since 2008-12-26
Posts 550
England
1 posted 2009-07-17 03:44 AM


Awwwww Billie that is So cute,
Even at a young age you were writing excellently..
Thank you for sharing..

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
2 posted 2009-07-17 10:38 AM


Yo dear Billie C,

This is nice.  Milk will do that for you.

Love Bobby

WTBAKELAR
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since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089
Utah, USA
3 posted 2009-07-17 04:07 PM


I drink lots of milk and my coat just keeps getting more wrinkles.

Cute poem.
Tracey.

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
4 posted 2009-07-19 11:15 AM


My word! Seven?!? ~ and already writing like that and getting publishe?!? I tellya, Billie, for what it's worth, I am VERY impressed!

I also think it is wonderful that you still have the poems that you wrote as a child. I have nary a poem from under the age of 14. Mind you, I would wager they would not have been of the caliber of the poems of yours that I have read.

This poem is as precious as you were ~ and still are!

Linda

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825
by the sea
5 posted 2009-07-19 11:54 AM


Hi Billie, this is so cute, your inspiration is very sweet and efficient, your verses are attractive and adorable...

tahnks for the poem.

yann

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
6 posted 2009-07-19 07:02 PM


Oh my, how lovely, dear Billie, you were a little wonderkid!

Love,
Margherita

OwlSA
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since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa
7 posted 2009-07-20 02:21 PM


Much enjoyed and ever so meeow from my darling Tigger, a tabby, and

Owl

Heart2Heart
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since 2009-05-15
Posts 738
Scotland/Norway
8 posted 2009-07-20 02:42 PM


Oh this is precious dear Billie, please post more of your poems you wrote as a child, I love to read them.  How talented you are dear lady
Heart2Heart

LindsayP
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since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria
9 posted 2009-07-22 01:02 AM



Ditto to H2H response dear Billie, It's no

wonder Tracey is such a good poet either.
Loved it.

Lindsay

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