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Bloodline
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since 2009-05-23
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Oklahoma

0 posted 2009-07-16 09:59 PM





His hand softly touches her bare shoulder
She gives love response as his voice whispers
Sweet nothings upon her cornsilk vespers
Brushed wholesomely to beautiful lush myrrh
Scented shine. Her perfume deeply bestirs
His flesh to a breathless warmth. Smiles occur
Between them, she slips a small palm under
His and they let go the world. Twilight purrs
In crimson and violet, lavender
And grey as one melts into the other.
Slowly each star appears in their rhythm,
Body and soul meld on an orbit spur
To parallel the Milky Way together!
Sighs escape while heartbeats quietly drum...

[This message has been edited by Bloodline (07-16-2009 11:19 PM).]

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A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
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Forever In Your Heart
1 posted 2009-07-16 11:33 PM


A very romantic escape!

~enjoyed

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
2 posted 2009-07-17 12:32 PM


Dear Bloodline, my own blood be stirred with this sweetly romantic write. Just lovely! Truly lovely!

~ Sensually, emotionally, and pictorally appealing!


EA

jbstillwater
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since 2009-07-03
Posts 216
Albuquerque, New Mexico
3 posted 2009-07-17 01:58 PM


Just beauatiful , Mr. G Bloodline, sensual and flowing like the love and romance this poem sends out.

Thanks
Jan

Billie Cullimore
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since 2009-03-27
Posts 315

4 posted 2009-07-17 10:09 PM



Lovely, just lovely.  The picture goes well with the words.

Well done.

Billie C.

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
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By the Seaside
5 posted 2009-07-17 10:14 PM


The quiet drum is so steady and sure, I love that about this.
Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
6 posted 2009-07-18 04:42 PM


Romance in wondrous outfit!

Most beautiful and stirring.

Love,
Margherita

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