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Chalmette Guy
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0 posted 2009-07-16 04:05 PM


Only in the black of night
Can eyes of the wolf be seen
Predatory thoughts of what is,
And what might have been
Glowing red, savage pupils dilated
Lidless and aflame with hate
Singular of purpose, this lust
To destroy any whom threaten fate

Sensing danger as mortal fear awakes
Grips hypnotic as in darkness born
Eyes lit by the light of their malice
Consumed in this firestorm

Knowing, knowing, all my flaws to extol
Growing, growing, those eyes swallow me whole


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Gaia
1 posted 2009-07-16 05:47 PM


personally I like wolves

bel1e
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2 posted 2009-07-16 06:18 PM


~~~niiice use of rhythm..could almost feel the wolf's heartbeat in this~~~

~enjoyed~

     

Margherita
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3 posted 2009-07-19 09:36 AM


Sounds like a nightmare, powerfully rendered fear.
Wolf eyes are magnetical. Instead of a threat, we might also see the ever present divine spark. Maybe not so easy in the middle of the night ...



Love,
Margherita

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4 posted 2009-07-19 02:33 PM


Little Red Riding Hood is quivering in her booties!

INTENSE writing! Well done!


EA

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5 posted 2009-07-19 02:58 PM


I like wolves too.  
I don't always like what wolves do.

Good one, CG.

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Bill Charles
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6 posted 2009-07-19 06:54 PM


Chalmette Guy - I have a friend called 'Dakota'. He's a 6 month old, 75 lb German Shepard/Timber Wolf. His eyes will hypnotize one at times.

BC

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