"The Heart's Patient Lesson"

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Open Poetry #45

"The Heart's Patient Lesson"

martiniat8
Senior Member

since 2003-06-21

Posts 897
Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic

0 posted 2009-07-15 11:39 PM

The knight rode in
on steady steed
patiently waiting
his planted seed

the maiden spoke
with tender clout
the harvest will come
when blossoms sprout

"Pause, dear heart
reflect refine
Perfection is sown
in the sands of time"

jbstillwater
Member

since 2009-07-03

Posts 216
Albuquerque, New Mexico

1 posted 2009-07-16 05:01 PM

So true, Martini, loved the last line best...
Jan

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

2 posted 2009-07-17 10:12 PM

Pause, dear heart
reflect refine

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There you go!! Chivalry in all it's glory is endearing at best.

Your work is a pleasure!!

Billie Cullimore
Member

since 2009-03-27

Posts 315

3 posted 2009-07-17 10:26 PM

I detect a hidden meaning here, very well done. I loved it.

Billie C.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

4 posted 2009-07-18 05:20 PM

Intriguing, like a secret.

Lovely!

Love,
Margherita

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