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Heart2Heart
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since 2009-05-15
Posts 738
Scotland/Norway

0 posted 2009-07-15 05:45 PM




Stay gentle yet wistful
And whisper to me
Of bluebells in springtime
And birds in each tree

Blow softly sweet breezes
Through waves rolling near
Delight me with songs
So soft in my ear

Enchant me with echoes
Across silver miles
Speak of the magic
Of mystical isles

Haunt me with thoughts
Don't ever depart
From dreams nestled deep
In my mesmerized heart

Then when clouds impinge
On my heavenly place
I'll smile through the mist
And meet your embrace....

© Copyright 2009 Heart2Heart - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
1 posted 2009-07-15 07:02 PM


Wonderful...James
Midnitesun
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Gaia
2 posted 2009-07-15 07:16 PM


Your imagery and rhymes are always superb, Katriona.
This is a sweet invitation.
(Nice photo!)

Heart2Heart
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since 2009-05-15
Posts 738
Scotland/Norway
3 posted 2009-07-16 12:45 PM


Thank you James, very kind of you to stop by.
Heart2Heart

Heart2Heart
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since 2009-05-15
Posts 738
Scotland/Norway
4 posted 2009-07-16 12:46 PM


Thanks ever so much Midnitesun for commenting on this little sentimental piece.
Heart2Heart

Chalmette Guy
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since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257
Louisiana
5 posted 2009-07-16 08:34 AM


Enchant me with echoes
Across silver miles
Speak of the magic
Of mystical isles
You speak to me of your isles. I enjoy reading every single thing you write.

Johan
Member
since 2009-05-13
Posts 88
Lincolnshire, England U.K.
6 posted 2009-07-16 08:54 AM


That's a better picture Katriona and the poetry so peacefully quiet, I mean lazy to read.

Johan

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart
7 posted 2009-07-17 07:46 AM


Loved the title, and that picture suits you, I agree, I always love reading your enchanting words of poetry!


~ARH

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825
by the sea
8 posted 2009-07-17 08:18 AM


so elegant write, an enchantment.

yann

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
9 posted 2009-07-17 10:29 AM


I enjoyed your "words of enchantment". Your poetry what I call 'feel good' poetry. It actually makes me feel good when I'm reading it. You tantalize my senses with gorgeous ~ and vividly descriptive ~ smells, sights, and sounds. Delightful!


Linda

Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
10 posted 2009-07-17 12:47 PM


Your poetry is always enchanting and well written, Heart2Heart.
                                 Ida

jbstillwater
Member
since 2009-07-03
Posts 216
Albuquerque, New Mexico
11 posted 2009-07-17 02:00 PM


Whimsical and a touch of the song that you must sing for your babes.  So soft and perfect

Huggs
Jan

Billie Cullimore
Member
since 2009-03-27
Posts 315

12 posted 2009-07-18 12:56 PM



I have to agree with every thing your admirers have said. Your poetry is always so uplifting and sweet.

Love 'un stuff

Billie C.

Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
13 posted 2009-07-18 05:08 PM


quote:
Haunt me with thoughts
Don't ever depart
From dreams nestled deep
In my mesmerized heart



A joy to read, dear Katriona. Profoundly beautiful flow to it and I relate ... I could say the quoted words to my hometown which is on a peninsula.

Love,
Margherita


LindsayP
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since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria
14 posted 2009-07-18 10:16 PM



Dear Katriona that was a delight to read,

very well done, much enjoyed my friend.love

Lindsay

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now
15 posted 2009-07-18 11:52 PM


Heart2Heart - glad I came by for a read, truly lovely...

BC

Heart2Heart
Senior Member
since 2009-05-15
Posts 738
Scotland/Norway
16 posted 2009-07-20 08:18 AM


I do thank you all so much for your wonderful responses to my poetry, it is so inspiring to read such enthusiasm and I am so grateful.
Heart2Heart  

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