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2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
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by the sea

0 posted 2009-07-15 09:59 AM


When is the intelligence?

To look at other one
makes clever.

Learning of mirages
moves the Bedouin.

To observe water
cleans glance.

[This message has been edited by 2islander2 (07-16-2009 03:16 AM).]

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Heart2Heart
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since 2009-05-15
Posts 738
Scotland/Norway
1 posted 2009-07-15 02:24 PM


You've penned this one like a series of proverbs Yann.  And who indeed knows when intelligence is smart?  I especially liked the last line.  
Heart2Heart

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
2 posted 2009-07-15 04:44 PM


Your thoughts, dear Yann, not only are intelligent, but also profound and beautiful.

All of them.

Love,
Margherita

Billie Cullimore
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since 2009-03-27
Posts 315

3 posted 2009-07-15 04:51 PM




You, My Dear are a very deep thinker.  Love your work.


Love 'un stuff
  Billie C.

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