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Artic Wind
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0 posted 2009-07-14 10:13 PM


        

As The Moon Descends

As the moon descends,
flamboyant sun awakens.
~Dawning of new day.

~
ARCTIC WIND

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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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1 posted 2009-07-14 10:21 PM


yes indeed it is lovely Michael!! What a beautiful pic!! and such graceful words... wonderful you!     RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Artic Wind
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2 posted 2009-07-14 10:32 PM


RDB ~ Where have you been!? I've missed your presents and your lovely poetry. I hope everything is okay there! Thanks for the love! Glad you liked it.

Love ya
ARCTIC WIND

OldPoet
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3 posted 2009-07-14 11:16 PM


Excellent Haiku.

"And every time I've held a rose
It seems I only felt the thorns,
And so it goes" - Billy Joel

Artic Wind
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4 posted 2009-07-15 12:19 PM


OldPoet ~ Thank you, your kind words has made my 'new' day!


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A Romantic Heart
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5 posted 2009-07-15 03:37 AM


I love sharing the moon...

and seeing a new day...just beautiful Michael!

So much beauty in the evening dusk, the morning dew, mist, nature is poetry, art,
very inspiring...

~ARH

Artic Wind
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6 posted 2009-07-15 11:00 AM


A Romantic Heart ~ Thank you! I've missed your poetry! I hope you post lots more. Always a pleasure to read!


ARCTIC WIND

brneyedgrly
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7 posted 2009-07-15 08:33 PM



~wind...

i love me some haiku!

love the use of the word 'flamboyant'



don't wait for the storms to end~
learn how to dance in the rain...

LindsayP
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8 posted 2009-07-15 10:10 PM



A beautiful picture Michael and a great

haiku, much enjoyed my friend.

Lindsay

OldPoet
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9 posted 2009-07-15 11:31 PM


Hey Cold one, I fear my comment was too brief. I really meant it. One sees a lot poor Haiku these days and a lot of what some think is Haiku but is really Senryu.

"And every time I've held a rose
It seems I only felt the thorns,
And so it goes" - Billy Joel

Margherita
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10 posted 2009-07-16 03:29 AM


Magical, dear Michael! A joy to read and behold with the inner eyes.

A perfect haiku indeed!

Love,
Margherita

Heart2Heart
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11 posted 2009-07-16 04:58 AM


Oh this is heavenly !  You have made my day by sharing this stunning haiku with us all.  Glorious job
Heart2Heart

2islander2
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12 posted 2009-07-16 06:30 AM


lovely write,..loved the picture and the write.


yann

Earth Angel
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13 posted 2009-07-16 06:24 PM


I simply adore this post in its entirety! Well done, Sir Wind.

Love 'n Moon Light,
EA

secondhanddreampoet
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14 posted 2009-07-16 09:10 PM


fine Haiku ... excellent photo-image!

applause!!

ThisDiamond
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15 posted 2009-07-17 12:33 PM


Enjoyed your lovely haiku
Marchmadness
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16 posted 2009-07-17 12:43 PM


Beautiful combination, Arctic Wind.
                               Ida

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17 posted 2009-07-17 11:10 AM


Lovely, Michael.  

A

Dark Star
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18 posted 2009-07-17 02:08 PM


lovely


Lana

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19 posted 2009-07-17 02:09 PM


brneyedgrly ~

THANK YOU!!!


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The Lady
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20 posted 2009-07-29 01:55 PM




I love the preciseness of Haiku AW
and this is lovely

Artic Wind
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21 posted 2009-07-29 02:46 PM


Lindsay! ~

Thank you


ARCTIC WID

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22 posted 2009-07-29 02:47 PM


Old Poet ~ No, of course not! I totally understood what you were saying. I wasn't joking when I said thank you


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Artic Wind
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23 posted 2009-07-29 02:48 PM


Margherita! ~ You too, write the perfect haiku's!


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Artic Wind
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24 posted 2009-07-29 02:49 PM


Heart2Heart ~ Your poems are heavenly as well! Thank you


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Artic Wind
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25 posted 2009-07-29 02:49 PM


Islander ~

Thanks


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Earth Angel ~

Thank you dear friend, Glad you enjoyed this piece


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Artic Wind
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27 posted 2009-07-29 02:50 PM


SHDP ~

Thanks!


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TD ~

Thanks! Glad you liked


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Artic Wind
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29 posted 2009-07-29 02:51 PM


Marchmadness ~ Thank you for your kind words! I always love that people enjoy my poems!


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Artic Wind
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30 posted 2009-07-29 02:51 PM


Alison~

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Artic Wind
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31 posted 2009-07-29 02:52 PM


Dark Star!

Thanks!


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32 posted 2009-07-29 02:52 PM


The Lady ~

WOW!~ Thanks for clicking! I was so happy to see this lovely surprise...


ARCTIC WIND

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