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Yoinn
Senior Member

since 2007-08-16

Posts 649
Michigan

0 posted 2009-07-14 05:08 PM

Soap Film

As the world turns
The bold and beautiful
Search for tomorrow
All the days of their lives.
Becoming young and restless
They go crazy,
Never finding their guiding light
Until they end up at
The edge of night
Locked up in the
General hospital.

Yoin

Please feel free to rewrite this piece in your replies. lol

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SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2009-07-14 06:16 PM

hey cool

that was fun...

Yoinn
Senior Member

since 2007-08-16

Posts 649
Michigan

2 posted 2009-07-14 11:21 PM

Thanks Sea. I have been in kinda a good mood today so i posted a few lighter pomes. Back to my usual now.

Thanks for the reply.

Yoin

Just reworked my old poetry page. Check it out before geocities takes it down. Yoin

OldPoet
Member

since 2009-06-30

Posts 112
The Left Coast

3 posted 2009-07-14 11:25 PM

Very clever and kind of cool as well.

"And every time I've held a rose
It seems I only felt the thorns,
And so it goes" - Billy Joel

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

4 posted 2009-07-15 03:55 AM

I love it, the artificial side of some people...enjoyable to share.

yann

brneyedgrly
Senior Member

since 2009-06-08

Posts 1125
nowhere and everywhere

5 posted 2009-07-15 02:21 PM

cute, yo...

you are so funny!

love,

berney

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