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0 posted 2009-07-14 01:53 AM


it’s getting late and he’s still out there
he’s not going to sleep beside me tonight,
instead, he’s out in the woods where he isn’t
supposed to be.  he’s a rule-breaker.

he won’t come to me when I call his name
maybe he doesn’t hear me and
that thought is too frightening to consider.

i am tired and, yet, i won’t sleep until I try again
not when he’s out there,  probably having fun,
doing things like stalking birds and hiding in the grass.
he’s having his big adventure while I cry and worry.

i left the garage door open wide, hoping
he will come in for supper or a cuddle,
but I don’t think his mission is complete

being the king of his jungle is hard work
and if he hears me crying, he’s not listening.

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Alison, underling of Kaz


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1 posted 2009-07-14 02:05 AM


Oh, Alison, my heart literally goes out to you. I've been in a similar situation and I understand how you're feeling. I believe that he'll come home dragging his contrite tail behind him.

In the meantime, go pick up a man and stick him in your bed until Kaz returns. Hm, on second thought, perhaps you should just hug a pillow. It's less complicated.

Giving you a warm, compassionate hug ~ and sending an angel posse after your beloved errant canine!


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2 posted 2009-07-14 02:13 AM




(big comfort hugs) Oh Alison, I understand that feeling of worry and consternation ever so much when, because we surely can't read the minds of our pets, we fear they are tempted to wander and, even when they are fairly domesticated and/or love their owners ever soooooooo much, get all excited about exploring the world just beyond the front porch and it could be too much for them sometimes! Here's hoping Kaz knows how to find his way home each time wherever he roams, my friend! (huggies)

Sincerely,
Noah Eaton

"If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other"

Mother Teresa

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3 posted 2009-07-14 02:59 AM


Dear Alison, I hope your dear friend comes home and makes you smile again, often we just worry too much, goodluck.

Rick

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4 posted 2009-07-14 06:42 AM


Hello Alison; I wish he will come back very soon, I smiled reading your poem thinking pets and men are rules breakers, I like the expression that don't exist in french...Thanks for the warm and entertaining poem.

yann

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5 posted 2009-07-14 09:37 AM


ms ali-san I can sure relate to this one...Itchy took off like this once too so I moved out of state while she was gone..never had to scratch that itch again.
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6 posted 2009-07-14 09:57 AM


Alison - sure does sound like my best friend who at times is the most stubborn critter I've ever seen. Dakota is his name, the wolf dog...

BC

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7 posted 2009-07-14 10:01 AM


I'll respond personally to each post later.  Thank you all who have written to this little poem.

I don't think Kaz has gotten much sleep last night and I have had none.  He's in the woods and has let me see him, but won't come close or let me get close.  Should I just leave him today - he has stopped responding to my calls - and try again tonight?  I am kind of at a loss - guess, I'll go to work and try again later.

He's hurting my heart.

A

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8 posted 2009-07-14 10:52 AM


My dear Alison, I feel your hurt too, hopefully he has just the intent of breathing a little bit of freedom and he will come back on his own. They love to hide in the grass for hours if they have smelled something tasty ...

Dear Kaz go home!!

Heartwrenching poem ...

Love,
Margherita

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9 posted 2009-07-14 10:53 AM


Oh brother I would freak!  They eventually come in when hungry they say, but I would try to grab him before night falls again.
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10 posted 2009-07-14 11:11 AM


Alison...I hope you get back your king of the jungle soon.
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11 posted 2009-07-15 06:51 AM


I haven't seen him tonight.  I might have heard him earlier, but I am not sure.  I just wander around calling him.  Some might think I am neurotic, but I really love my animals - and while I know that cats can do this stuff (and often do), it does not make it easier.

Thank you everyone - I just want my cat.

A

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12 posted 2009-07-15 07:44 AM


Okay, about a half hour after writing the message above, Kaz decided to come home.  It took a monster thunder storm to bring him in.  He's pretty proud of himself at the moment - and aloof like the King should be.  I want to pound his butt even though this is normal cat behavior.  I wasn't sure how he would do out in the big rural world as he was a Seattle cat and lived in an apartment prior to coming to be with me.  Obviously, he's resiliant, stubborn and smart.  

And he's on my list and is under house arrest.

Thank you all for thinking of him - and me.

xoxoxo
Alison

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13 posted 2009-08-12 06:08 PM


They can worry you to pieces, can't they? *S* I'm glad the wanderer returned home... and his lack of contrition is pure cat! LOL
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14 posted 2009-08-13 02:17 AM


You are so right, Ruth.  I think he's happy to be home and is really not wanting to return to that scarey world.  We don't talk about it because, being male and a cat, he'd have to show me how brave he is.

Sheese.  Isn't that just like so many men I know.

xoxoxo
Alison

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15 posted 2009-08-13 09:10 AM


wow, seems like our pets have a lot in common.  BOTH of my dogs nosed their way under that gate...  The ones we love give us so much trouble don't they?

Anyway, another fantastic poem... I'm off to read more!

Rileigh

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16 posted 2009-08-13 10:09 AM


Thank you.  I know what you mean.  I have three dogs and three cats.  And I pull my hair a lot.  Gotta love them though.  Right?

xoxoxo
Alison

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17 posted 2009-08-13 08:12 PM


I'm so glad Kaz returned, Alison. I have been there, done that, Maybe he should be grounded for a while.
                                Ida

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18 posted 2009-08-13 10:11 PM


I know how you feel, Alison. I have 2 dogs and a cat. My cat never even goes outside, much less wander off. And, my dogs are only allowed outside in a fenced backyard. They did get out one time, and I went crazy trying to find my dogs.
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19 posted 2009-08-14 12:01 PM


Ida,

As soon as he got home, he was on notice that he is under house arrest.  So far so good - he seems to like the gruel just fine.

Thank you.
xoxoxo
A

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Sue,

Yep, he's pretty content to be home now.  I think he was pretty scared in the big, thundery world.

xoxoox
Alisom

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