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Yoinn
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since 2007-08-16
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Michigan

0 posted 2009-07-13 07:00 PM



Since your gone.

Beer bottles lean on each other
On my dirty cluttered counter.
My dog eyes the pizza box left on the coffee table.
In the other room, my drunken friends are
Watching Sunday night football.

As I stand at the fridge
and take a drink straight from the milk jug
I laugh and pass gas at the same time,
Thinking of you.

Yoin


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Bloodline
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since 2009-05-23
Posts 236
Oklahoma
1 posted 2009-07-13 07:27 PM


Yoinn,

Ah, those introspective moments,

Bloodline

brneyedgrly
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since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125
nowhere and everywhere
2 posted 2009-07-13 07:28 PM



~freakin' hilarious!!



love,
berney

don't wait for the storms to end~
learn how to dance in the rain

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
3 posted 2009-07-13 07:55 PM


A true debochee scenery!

Men just can't cope with dignity!

I fear this reflects a diffused reality ... Not yours I hope!

Love,
margherita

Yoinn
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4 posted 2009-07-13 08:03 PM


Ah its what i live for those moments.

thanks for the reply Blood

Yoin

Yoinn
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5 posted 2009-07-13 08:04 PM


hehe Thanks berney.

Yoin (burp)

Yoinn
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6 posted 2009-07-13 08:06 PM


Me? oh no way, this is all fiction Margherita

I spend my nights reading and writing poetry with a glass of brandy and ( hey turn that TV down in there you morons) and my cat.

Yoin

[This message has been edited by Yoinn (07-14-2009 05:43 PM).]

Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688
Waukegan
7 posted 2009-07-13 08:25 PM


.

good

It's tough to be free.

.

Yoinn
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since 2007-08-16
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8 posted 2009-07-13 08:39 PM


Yeah it really is Huan.
I guess i will just keep drinking and smoking my cigars until I get the hang of it.

Yoin

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
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9 posted 2009-07-13 08:42 PM


Multi tasking like that takes a bit of skill... glad you laugh that hard!
Cute poem

Yoinn
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since 2007-08-16
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10 posted 2009-07-13 08:44 PM


LOL TD yeah and I forgot to put in I had my cigar in my hand too. Maybe i will do a rewrite.

thanks

Yoooooiiinnnnn

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
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11 posted 2009-07-13 11:03 PM


Yoinn - you are truly an artist, I love this writing...

BC

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825
by the sea
12 posted 2009-07-14 06:51 AM


Yo Yoinn, it looks very famailair to me, specially the fridge and the pizza part, Enjoyed very much your thoughts here in a very shared lifestyle, I wish it won't last ...Thanks for the poem.

yann

Yoinn
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13 posted 2009-07-14 02:35 PM


Thanks Bill

I do appreciate your replies.

Yoin

Yoinn
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14 posted 2009-07-14 02:36 PM


thanks Yann

I keep my bicycle in the livin room now too. lol

Yoin

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