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Hiroshige II |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. July night And the air Is finally cool There is so little Wind among the trees The leaves hardly move Yet what old man Are your thoughts about Mute as ever Beneath summer stars Somehow lost In another mood Ah yes Now I remember The new snow On her umbrella Under a gibbous moon . |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo John, Another memorable print—you’ve done good work on this poem. Bobby |
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jbstillwater Member
since 2009-07-03
Posts 216Albuquerque, New Mexico |
Loved it! Visual and important in its message. I love the last two lines. You can write! Jan |
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Yoinn Senior Member
since 2007-08-16
Posts 649Michigan |
Huan, My friend it just doesn't get any better than this. Yoin |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
What a lovely scene you've painted here. Ida |
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