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th1nktw1ce
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since 2009-07-13
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0 posted 2009-07-13 06:49 AM


To live and to die
Both particular
Intrinsic designs

To be and to need
Sunday spectacular
And a tale of this
Wonderful semitary mile

Shall we sit and wait?
Shall we sing and wander
This wonderful semitary mile?

To one be all
And to us be everything
Those past have left,
A best to best and a hope
We'll walk this semitary mile
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Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
1 posted 2009-07-13 02:40 PM

Yo th1nktw1ce,

The thought and idea behind this poem is very good.

I'd try "cemetery", instead of "semitary" though.

Bobby
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