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OldPoet
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0 posted 2009-07-12 11:39 PM



"And every time I've held a rose
It seems I only felt the thorns,
And so it goes" - Billy Joel

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1slick_lady
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1 posted 2009-07-13 12:09 PM


i am such a fan of yours
your poetry is incredible
ALL of it


OldPoet
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2 posted 2009-07-13 12:10 PM


Well Slick One, I'm a big fan of you're being my big fan. Thank you very much!

"And every time I've held a rose
It seems I only felt the thorns,
And so it goes" - Billy Joel

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3 posted 2009-07-13 03:47 AM


I like Helen, am enjoying your posts.  Well written.

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martiniat8
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4 posted 2009-07-13 04:06 AM


I think I read your last line wrong, maybe needed a comma after heart. I asked myself, what is a heart remote. It may just be my distracted mind though. great write
OldPoet
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5 posted 2009-07-13 11:50 PM


I see your point, Martinia, but I think the pause there would break the rhythm. Thanks for the comment.

"And every time I've held a rose
It seems I only felt the thorns,
And so it goes" - Billy Joel

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