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sheridan44
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0 posted 2009-07-12 01:39 PM


Sunlight Slivers through this one window room
Shinning prominently amongst the abyss of darkness
Starring quietly at a starless ceiling
Entrenched in his thoughts and the clamor of his breathing
His mind is the color of the clouds
His heart, the color of shadows
Both once fruitful with complexion
Have now shifted grey
As apathy washes the color away

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Anniepimm
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1 posted 2009-07-12 01:42 PM


Hi sheridan44 welcome to pip's
It's very nice to meet you..
Excellent first poem I liked it
Well penned..

sheridan44
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2 posted 2009-07-12 01:48 PM


Thank you very much
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3 posted 2009-07-12 01:58 PM


Very poignant.  I too have seen this picture all to clearly.  A very strong first post I must say, and very good.

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