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Chaotic Whispers
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Chaotic Whispers |
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Anniepimm Senior Member
since 2008-12-26
Posts 550England 
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Chaotic Whispers Daylight dims into night time dust, As the sounds of the day fade away Chaotic Whispers quietly hum, in the distance As the light hours begin to decay, You can hear the faint cry in the distance A voice; expressing there undying heart Sadness and pain are written knowing love is tearing them apart, Stories are told around a camp fire Tales of ghost, and love that's devine All adds to the Chaotic Whispers A place to express your lives, No one knows; how they get there They arrive in a haze of delight All eager to soak up the knowledge As the day fades chaotically into night Annie 12-07-2009 |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I just spent yesterday in Chaotic Whispers, at a campsite with my granddaughters, it was fun. However, you nailed the distant whispers dead-on  still laughing about explaining ours.I always look forward to reading your work. |
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Anniepimm Senior Member
since 2008-12-26
Posts 550England |
Ohhh errr I must be Psychic  I hear whispers all the time Thank you for your feed back petal It's much appreciated |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Anniepimm Senior Member
since 2008-12-26
Posts 550England |
Thank you i am glad you enjoyed it |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
That is such a sweet poem dear Annie, A real delight to read. Keep up your good work. Love to you and take care. Lindsay |
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Anniepimm Senior Member
since 2008-12-26
Posts 550England |
Awwww thank you Lindsay, I am glad you liked it and best wishes to you and your family |
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Bloodline Member
since 2009-05-23
Posts 236Oklahoma |
Anniepimm, Whispers like dejavu sometimes can help us through the now and thens, thanks for making some sense of them in muse, Bloodline |
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Anniepimm Senior Member
since 2008-12-26
Posts 550England |
Thank you Bloodline, it was my Pleasure.. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Well, it certainly was a delight to see your pretty face smiling at me this morning! I needed that! I've seen more than a few frowns this morning! Oh, and your soothing, whishpering poems was calming...soothing... "Stories are told around a camp fire Tales of ghost, and love that's devine All adds to the Chaotic Whispers A place to express your lives," ~ Alluring...I'm being called...  Have a glorious day!  Linda |
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Anniepimm Senior Member
since 2008-12-26
Posts 550England |
Awwwww Thank you Linda, What a lovely response I am so happy you liked my poem, It makes me happy to know that I have touched someone in someway... Blessings to you..  |
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something meaningful Junior Member
since 2009-07-17
Posts 12Wisconsin, USA |
i really like this. i could totaly understand what u were saying and meant. i could picture it so well. |
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sim0riah Member
since 2004-09-07
Posts 253Wyoming USA |
Verry Nice Annie.. I can definately relate Rich |
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Anniepimm Senior Member
since 2008-12-26
Posts 550England |
Thank you both for your lovely comments It makes writing so much more rewarding when people manage to take something away with them to treasure.. Blessings to ya..  |
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